Crown of Disaster

Very good, doesn't make the mistake of other mystery authors - focus on mystery. It's so weird that we can't understand it at all, and it's weird every moment. The protagonist's abilities are easy to understand and the world is similar to ours, so the level of recognition is high. The process is clean, the characters are vivid, and the writing is good. But I hope the author will not make the mistake of other authors and focus too much on the copy, because this will distract the readers a lot and make them lose their patience, which is commonly known as going off topic. In my opinion, if the dungeon is only for the protagonist's personal use, then the author must regard it as a very simple prop to strengthen the protagonist. The plot in the dungeon should be as short as possible. If the main line is a big tree, then they are branches. If the branches are too thick, they will rob the trunk of nutrients and tire the tree to death.

Suddenly I realized why the emotional line of this book made me feel uncomfortable. It was the character of the male protagonist. The male protagonist's character in this book is a bit greasy. It's not that you can't make the male protagonist a lustful person, but I personally think it's more difficult to grasp the point of being lustful and not greasy at the same time. I hope the author can try to reduce the emotional part as much as possible before grasping it well. Otherwise, it's really a bit inferior.

Much more humorous than his previous books! 💪🐶

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I feel like the most exciting part is The Devil's Cage, but it feels like it's unfinished, with a lot of holes left unfilled, and it ended suddenly, so abruptly.

As I write, I just write randomly because of my own pleasure. In the last book, a middle-aged macho uncle started acting coquettishly and eating dried fish as he wrote it. He also wrote this plot repeatedly and couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. In this book, Akane's female supporting character has an inexplicable IQ. There is a snack box in a tree hole in the wilderness. It's so sudden and there is no question at all. It's really drunk.

After the first climax, Gate of Flesh, it felt like the quality suddenly dropped, like a running account, and the power system became unclear. . . I want to write the same thing as someone else. . . Wow, it collapsed so badly

Well, the beginning of the book is still a bit interesting, but later it feels like it's back to the previous books... Several consecutive dungeons end in a hurry, just get a few skill points and equipment, and there is no sense of digging into the plot at all.

It is recommended that the author be locked up in a dark room so that he can code quickly without being disturbed 😤. Once again, I despise Qidian's new book investment requirement. 10 Minutes of reading? How can I read only 2 chapters for 10 minutes? This is not a level where you can read each character one by one. You have to read each stroke one by one and it only takes 10 minutes.

Goethe looked at the Grand Duke's family who had fallen for him, and asked with a crazy look on his face: "Why did you do this for me?" "Because we are family, the last relatives in this world." The sister who floated in front of Goethe returned, "But we are not even blood relatives, the witch's curse..." Goethe, who looked paranoid, was interrupted by his sister loudly, "Because of the ritual, the witch's curse will naturally be solved by the witch. My mother is the Witch King. The traitor cursed our family. The Mad King and my mother worked out a way to solve the curse." "Witch" Goethe looked at his sister in disbelief. "Yes, I am also a witch. My mother fell into a deep sleep because of this, but we are the last relatives in this world. We have confirmed it with a ceremony. Is this reason enough?" "Could it be that I really thought wrong?" Goethe wondered, but looked at his sister who was fighting for him. "It's wrong to be wrong. The worst is to go crazy again." Open the ruins

The strong make the rules and the weak abide by them. This is true at all times and in all countries. Some people write novels, which are simply poisonous. When you are weak, you can be a virgin bitch, but when you become a top strong person and are still bound by some weak rules, what do you do? Fortunately, this is not the case with this book. I have high expectations and the author has added more updates, but it is not enough to read.

Three chapters together are only 3,700 words? You go too far

When I saw the second secret realm, I wanted to ask my book friends, are they going to be stuck in the main storyline and then keep entering the small world of the secret realm? ? ? I don't really like this kind of reading feeling. If so, it's a bit boring…

The power system is very messy. I got hooked after the first big chapter. Then I stopped reading. I couldn't remember who the protagonist was or what power he had. There is a kind of protagonist who is very strong but doesn't know why he is strong. It's very mysterious, so the readers don't know. It's been like this since the last book.

Finished after not watching it for a while? I feel bad

My suggestion is to switch to unlimited partitions. This book deserves better results.

I feel that if the official government is really pulling the strings, it still needs to be appropriately strengthened. Otherwise, it would have been overthrown a long time ago if the government relied on nothing and could still maintain such combat effectiveness with official resources.

Continuation of the book: "Are you awake, Mad King, or should I call you King Arthur?" Goethe said coldly, "If you are awake, hand over the Sword in the Lake to me. I am still in a hurry to save people." >"You're so powerful, you deserve to be my successor, but Merlin, why are you helping this kid bully his own people." The Mad King spat blood and looked back at the man in black robe and said, "That's not to save you, you are here How long have you been trapped here? We all came in to save you," the old man in black robe said disgustedly. "What about Vivian?" The Mad King looked up at the dark cloud that was gathering strength. "She protects your descendants between dreams and the present. She is entrusted by her. I really can't bear to see you, a fool, sinking here, so I came here together with my old brother." Merlin waved his hand and interrupted Goethe who was gathering strength. "Don't worry, let us old guys die, and the new world will be left to you." "Knights of the Round Table Gather" The Mad King waved the Sword in the Lake to split the barriers of the world and moved forward. The dead figures gathered behind the Mad King, "Go to the Dark Crows, tell the world that their master is back, let the world tremble again," black tracks dissipated in the sky, announcing to the world the return of the Mad King and the arrival of the war. "This world will dissipate and you will become the king." After saying this, Merlin summoned the white horse and turned into a ray of light to catch up with the Mad King. "But I just want to protect my family, and the family can happily gather together and eat a delicious meal. I don't want to be the Mad King, I just want to be myself." Goethe burned the glory, and the lightning condensed into shackles, locking the Mad King. "I want to cut off life and death in my own way, and cut off the fate of my family. Instead of letting everyone hide in nothingness and survive, I want to walk uprightly under the light." "Okay, okay, you are qualified to pick up the Sword in the Lake, and the next thing is up to you." The Mad King smiled instead of angry, and injected all his strength into it with his backhand. "I will wait for you in the realm of nothingness. If I don't do well, I will use my method to change the world and work hard for my descendants." Goethe took the sword in the lake and left the secret realm impatiently. "What the people want and where victory is, the Sword in the Stone will naturally appear. Then he will be the next generation king. If the Sword in the Stone does not appear, you will not have breached the contract. Your plan is very thorough." Merlin smiled, "Yes, so now we are going to the land of nothingness. I don't have the divine sword and now I need you to clear the way, my Archmage." The Mad King patted Merlin. "Okay, my Lord Knight, but should you tidy up your image? After all, you want to see Vivian." Merlin smiled as before and opened the portal. Arthur tidied up his image a little and walked quickly towards the portal, followed by these twelve tall figures.

It feels like your novel realm lacks a system

Although the routine is good, it will get boring if you use it too much. Even after you start to get tired of it, the problem that the original power system is too fragmented and trivial will become more prominent. If you don't want to make drastic innovations, it's not a bad idea to return to the early style and conduct in-depth deductions to realize the historical spiral. The big-muscle tyrant style of several body-building books combined with close combat and advanced combat skills is too prominent and completely overwhelms the presence of weapons, not to mention that there are many transitional weapons with no name or identity. The relatively outstanding Qin Ran couldn't make a deep impression even with his two-handed giant sword, let alone the others. When Ye Qi held the Yan Demon Sword, he could have dug deeper into the combat skill system. He was originally a heretic warlock who relied on his physique. His potential was huge just by relying on his skills. There was no need to stack various alien energy affinities. The power of the dragon species is still too much affected by DND. When it comes to breathing, it is dragon flames and burning hands. Fans of Long Lei and Long Bing have also come up in recent years, such as the ancient dragon thunder and lightning belief born from the reversal of the two poles of the soul system by the old man next door, and the dragon head breath prayer system of Let a Hundred Flowers Bloom. It's not that the devil is unpopular, but there are too many people writing about it. These days, they are tempted to take the devil's path to purgatory to open up a new track. Evil Eye is not bad, but it cannot be deeply integrated and used with other elements. It is not a bad thing that it has been abandoned in the past two books. But it is not possible to consider transplanting a similar high-potential system to Demon Pet. In fact, the role of Hell Demon Spider and Dark Crow can be more prominent, such as the shadow of the magic destroyer next door, and the magic pet as a teammate.

Everyone is welcome to share your experience, floors, and come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Fat Dragon

24K is pure fooling. I don't want to read Fei Long's book anymore. I'm angry. Can I write it more satisfactorily? Suddenly it ends just for the sake of the ending. It ends right after it starts.

Can you please stop writing about such idiotic female supporting characters? The Demon Hunting Cooking Manual is a book that only fools would not read.

It's a pity that it will disappear as soon as I keep it. I'm looking forward to the next book. The story of nostalgia 9527

Goethe

I prepared about a dozen monthly tickets and planned to vote for Feilong when they doubled, but ended up finishing them at the beginning of the month? Is it because of the poor performance of this book? Personally, I like Demon Hunter the most, the system is clear, but the system gradually becomes less visible in the later ones.

? ? ? Let me go, why did you suddenly finish the book?

I felt like I was reading too much after writing it for so long. I remember a paragraph before. Goethe was in a club and wanted to cut off his finger. An instructor saved him. Then he cooked a meal for the instructor. The instructor said that he should become a cook. In the later stage, when the so-called brother of the lucky family was trying to kill "them", Goethe said that he only knew how to beat eggs in instant noodles. It felt like some settings were becoming more and more vague.

Come on! Fat Dragon Oni-chan! Praise Feilong gave me a monthly ticket

. ? Holy shit, what the hell?