Fishing Under the Stars

[Fn=2_3]Creative and the rhythm is super good!

The author's writing style is very spiritual[fn=2_3]

The body's self-healing setting is awesome. Little lolita and tofu girls must accept it!

It would be a pity if the character who spent so much time and effort on dies here. I hope he can continue to shine in the future.

After reading through the updated chapters, the article is not lackluster in terms of text expression at all, but these words are piled up with orthodox intentions and even a little bit of personal style. It is this original writing style that deeply attracted me. After reading it through, I felt a hearty pleasure.

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Haha, the writing in this book is very suitable for my taste. I will read it every day! ~

The author's novel successfully told me that I can't guess the author's thoughts. This is really a cruel reality!

Your book is not suitable for speed reading. The text is concise, the pace is fast, and there are too few descriptions. Most of the dialogue drives the plot. It is a bit like a script, leaving too many things for readers to think about. I hope this can be changed, otherwise this style of writing may not be able to appeal to the tastes of mainstream readers. Of course, this is a good idea and story in itself, and the character setting is also very cute, but the description skills seem to be a little bit lacking. I hope it can be written longer, and I will definitely support it when it is put on the shelves. [Fn=4_2]

The name is awesome and the introduction is awesome~ I am kneeling down and worshiping [fn=2_7]

After reading twenty chapters in one go, I felt two things. The main character was very calm, and even I became very calm as I watched it, thinking that no matter what happens in the plot, it should be taken for granted. The second point is that when I look at it, I suddenly feel like I am reading a comic, but sometimes the visual sense is not very strong, and I strongly urge to add some more visual sense. Overall it's very good, I can't stop. There is another question I would like to ask the author. Is that cute girl who keeps clamoring about getting together the heroine?

This book must be quite old, and no one has commented in the book review area. I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I feel that it is okay, but it is not popular. There are basically no book reviews for the previous ones... So the book reviews are basically all written by me... It feels good to dominate the book reviews

The article is very novel and the plot is very attractive. Today, when there are so many works, I am really happy to see such works... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers!

After reading three chapters, let me talk about the advantages first. This is the first time I have seen this type of novel. It is quite novel and very different from many other template novels. It makes people feel refreshed after reading it. Yes, the first and second chapters are quite attractive, and I can't help but read on. The girl in the third chapter is so awesome that she wants Pigfoot to go to the academy to study. . . Disadvantages: Some words are not expressive: Chapter 2: Living in a underground city hundreds of meters above Mercury!!!! Typos: The right leg is a prosthetic leg, and the face is a bit broken! ! ! It must be haggard! ! ! Overall, it's a good novel to read, keep up the good work! Still reading. . . .

There are some pretty women who feel more refreshed when they kill them. Especially the kind of woman with a twitchy head and an unrefined appearance.

From what I can tell, the author is a newbie and made a lot of mistakes in the early stage, but I still like it. I subscribe and support it.

Press your paw, you are mine! By the way, how many chapters has the author saved?

The main character is well portrayed, but the beginning is a bit confusing. The author recommends new terms to be used sparingly in new books. It makes me feel tired. Also, I have learned a lot, and this is the first time I have heard of lung stones. . .

(There are reviews from the Reading Review Group on the third floor) The review team of Xinxing Literary Society usually publishes 10 reviews for a book. In the end, I published 6 reviews in that issue. Later, someone else added a review, and in the end, there were only 7 reviews... It's not that the negative reviews were blocked... The review mainly focuses on the first tens of thousands of words... If you are hesitant and don't want to follow the book, you can take a quick look... Most of the shortcomings pointed out in it, I think, have been corrected. 1@ First of all, the character setting in the first chapter - human bait is very confusing, but it also arouses curiosity about human bait. We quickly got to the point. After one chapter, we deeply understood the meaning of human bait. And there is a divine reversal: the human bait becomes the hunter, and the hunter becomes the human bait. Contradictions, conflict and suspense are all there. The setting of the monsters is very suspenseful, and overall, it's a very good article. ………… 2@Tongue can poisonous flower The writing style of this article is relaxed and humorous, and the character's personality is relatively clear. The entire opening is compact and exciting. The development of the plot such as accidents, reversals and climaxes is already a relatively complete short plot. The highlights and golden fingers of the protagonist have been pointed out, and the suspense is also laid. However, the rhythm of the subsequent plot seems to be a bit slow for me personally; If there is something that needs to be discussed with the author, it is that the characterization of the book still seems to have a two-dimensional feel. Compared with the heavy atmosphere of the opening background, some words and deeds that are too funny and funny seem to destroy the rendering of that depressing atmosphere. If it can be based on the development of the plot, it will be relaxed when it should be relaxed and heavy when it should be heavy, then it may seem more empathetic to me, come on! ………… 3@MR [Brief Comment]: Both the title and the introduction of the novel look very innovative. I personally feel that there are many highlights in the first chapter of the novel, whether it is the reversal of the plot or the novel theme. The "principles" in the second chapter are well introduced, and I feel that it has been very good up to this point. However, starting from the third chapter, the novel feels a bit like a two-dimensional anime. The events are not written in detail, and the theme of "fishing" gradually becomes dull, and gradually turns to the cultivation routine with the big wave. The plot is not detailed, and the description of the scene details and other aspects is missing. The character setting in the novel is still not detailed enough. Both the appearance, movement and personality of the characters (the protagonist's personality is okay) are relatively simple. I can't understand some things in the plot. For example, how does a girl eat a person? How to spit it out? (Modified) I hope you, the author, will work hard. ………… 4@Hiding the wind and accepting the energy [Advantages]: 1. The author introduces the protagonist with the contrast in the opening chapter, and the description is concise and neat; 2. The background identity situation is simply introduced, and the plot is arranged step by step; 3. The plot unfolds one after another, making it attractive to read. [Disadvantages]: 1. The description of the characters' psychological activities is not delicate enough. ………… 5@Killmoyan [Advantages]: The opening chapter is exciting, the setting is also very innovative, and the fishing design of bait counter-kill is very good. The writing is witty and concise. The plot is compact, the plot has ups and downs, and is fascinating. [Disadvantages]: The detailed description is somewhat lacking, and the text feels dry. There are almost no descriptions of scenes, character traits, psychology, etc. To set off the atmosphere, and the world is cold and cold. ………… 6@88 [Advantages]: The opening chapter is wonderful, the story concept is novel, human bait, above ground, underground, magic power, Taoist power, a certain Taoist, and technology support each other. The language is humorous and interesting. [Disadvantages]: It feels a bit messy because everything is included. Does the author want to write about magic and technology or Taoism and technology? I feel that the author has not positioned it well, and there is always a crossover and it is too confusing. The main line of the story is confusing, there are too many side lines, and the characters appear too suddenly. The rhythm of the story is not very good. The most important thing is that the male protagonist is always killed and it is so tragic that there is no time to stop. ………… 7@Left beam analysis [Advantages]: The story content is novel. [Disadvantages]: 1. The introduction is not written smoothly enough, and there is less information related to the theme of the story. 2. The plot design is unreasonable. For example: Qi Peng, a member of the Qi family in the dungeon, left the dungeon alone to hunt with the protagonist (I didn't read it carefully, the reason will be explained later). 3. The plot of the protagonist escaping from being killed is not well described, which affects the subsequent development of the conflict between the protagonist and important figures in the Qi family and the excitement of the story. 4. The use of language is not rigorous enough, making the characters' personalities not outstanding enough.

I read the first chapter and thought it was very good, but I still resisted reading it because I was afraid it would end badly. If the author could write a million words, I would follow 🥺

Starting today, the Grassroots Pirates Group is officially established! Ship number 186684234~ Currently there is only one person blowing wind on the bow of the ship, so lonely... [Fn=3_1]