Sage and Girl

Reading this book is very similar to the early reading of "Blocking the Demons", the feeling of "I know it's exciting but it's hard to start reading, and once I've read it, it's hard to stop", so I automatically subscribe to it and read it after I've saved up enough. From this point of view, I hope the author will not be discouraged. In terms of the nature of your work, it will be more likely to attract readers after the completion than the serialization period. As long as you are still writing books after the completion of this book, your previous books will continue to be discovered by new people. At the same time, it is obvious that the author takes his work very seriously, but the structure is too elaborate to attract readers who are accustomed to "cool" in the opening part. In fact, there is no conflict between being precise and refreshing. For example, in Ergen's Immortal Ni, he created a funny character to make readers happy. For example, in Ruzidi under the Binglin God, he used ups and downs of the plot to make readers happy. I also hope that the author can create his own method of attracting readers.

A very outstanding work, with delicate writing and rigorous layout. It reminds me of the feeling of reading The Lord of the Rings. Unfortunately, it has been buried in the impetuous Internet age. Does the author want to try the publishing route? Support the author, gold will always shine. The author's excellent writing style and imagination may be buried in the Internet Festival, but I think there will always be a day when he shines and makes everyone look up to him!

When I was young, my dream was to write a similar Western fantasy light novel, but it failed in reality. When I saw the book Sage, I saw my childhood dream. Then support the author well and subscribe to the full book. I hope the author will stick to the full book. Come on💪

It's a good book, but it loses its flavor after reading for a long time.

After reading the longest prologue in history, all the passages appeared in my mind one after another like pictures, the scenery and actions turned into images, and the sound rang in my ears with a natural sound. The final annotation is like a patterned annotation page in a comic. As a web text, the presentation form of this book is too monotonous. If it were a physical book, it could be modified with different font sizes and laces. If there is an opportunity in the future, if there are conditions that are still difficult for me to achieve now, I will promote the publication of this book.

After reading it once, I always forget the names of people and places in it. This book needs to be read slowly, but it still seems a bit out of the ordinary. After one chapter is finished, the next chapter is more confusing. I feel like I've read it very carefully, but I still missed some plot points.

I rarely write book reviews (because the atmosphere in the Qidian book review circle is really not very good), but I finally caught up with the update and decided to write something. What should I say about this book? It is the most unusual book I have seen on Qidian. Its depth is not at a level that can be found in the cookie-cutter Qidian Shuangwen. It is the kind of book that is not paid attention to in the domestic environment but can occupy a place in the foreign fantasy novel world. I originally discovered that this book was actually recommended by Qidian, but to be honest, I was discouraged many times by the introduction. Finally, I clicked in to read it by chance when I was in a book shortage. Originally, I had the mentality of reading the light novel and not reading it (because I actually hate the popular light novels, slap in the face, dark style, invincible white novels, farming style, etc.), But actually I was deeply attracted after reading a few chapters. This book is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air in the fantasy mudslide at Qidian. Why do I say this? It does not lie in how complete and self-consistent the setting and worldview of the book are, or how deeply rooted the characters are in people's hearts (of course the author has done these two things very well. If you read them carefully, you will find that the author has put in a lot of effort), but in the author's knowledge reserve and life experience. From each author's writing style and the psychological description of the protagonist, we can actually get a glimpse of the author's mental maturity. There is no doubt that the author of this book can lead most readers, including me, to think and learn in this regard. This proves that the author's vision is at a higher level than mine. What is reflected in the book is as if the author is a sage, inadvertently telling us a lot of knowledge we don't know, making us reflect on our own way of doing things. However, the author of this book is not like some authors who like to analyze modern people's thinking in their articles and then compare it to the protagonist. Instead, the author of this book does not deliberately discuss these major principles in the article, but only subtly lets readers who really know how to appreciate this book understand. So I have a bit of admiration for the author, and I hope to tell the author who is no longer affected by messy people that there are real readers who support you. Come on!

Otherwise... Forget about changing jobs and find a more reliable website.

What you were worried about finally happened. As expected, yw and TX got a taste of the sweetness. After finishing the "Star Moment", they were engaged in the "Golden Autumn Welfare" in the blink of an eye. . . I am also an author! Enough of this feeling of powerlessness!

I really admire the author. The background setting of this book is probably longer than the main text, right? Settings that are as meticulous as life details appear in the text inadvertently, giving me an extremely real feeling. Great book! Praise!

It was put on hold for several months😥

I have read so many books, and this one has the best descriptions of details! ! ! , With strict logic, it is a novel that must be read carefully. I would say that this book can be called a top quality book. However, the readership of this book is too small, and it is a must-read for those who love Western fantasy! ! !

Out of the desire to bring this world to life, I started organizing this book. Currently, only chapters one to two have been compiled. It's not a lot, but it will be added gradually. There is a lot to learn to implement this idea, but I am learning. Send a picture of worldmachine The terrain is based on po_er's tutorial. Characters Mira About eleven or twelve years old Delicate features and petite body She is about the kind of very cute girl who will make you protective at first glance Luoan girl Henry Meyer Great Sage Weapon: Claymore Black hair, gray and blue eyes Deep voice Wizard blasphemer (a head is worth ten gold coins of dragon heads) Not necessarily human Geography 1. Terrain If you start from the border line in the north of Avenella and go south, then you will find that the farther south it goes, the gentler the mountains and the warmer the climate. 2. River The picturesque scenery makes it located in the center of the Ecasta Plain, close to the Galil River that originates here ① The Galil River The center of the Ecasta Plain where it originates 3. Climate 1. The weather in early autumn is particularly cool in coastal areas with a hot and humid climate all year round Country 1. Avenella 1. Location: The foot of the east side of the Tambor Mountains, southeast of the west coast of the Inland Sea of Morbigas 2. Population: less than two million citizens Mixed with all kinds of people Hundreds of thousands of adventurers and mercenaries The floating population can exceed one million at most 3. Industries: 1. With mountains and forests full of World of Warcraft at its back 2. The commercial and hotel industries, as well as various entertainment ancillary industries are extremely prosperous 3. The handicraft manufacturing industry is developed (many excellent master craftsmen have also come to this country incognito) Settled down. ) 4. Or use child labor (in a country where the hotel industry and service industry are extremely developed, it is common for children at home to help with the work in the shop.) 2. Avenella's neighboring countries Poor and aggressive 3. The Third Kingdom of Luoan Destroyed 20 years ago under the iron heel of the Western power Otolo's external expansion All people are in arms Using hair color as a racial boundary, plundering and enslaving people from other countries in wars as craftsmen, farmers, chefs and even barbers Unwilling to submit These proud northern people have since wandered around and become wandering tribes. 1. Some people have become unknown mercenaries 2. Became bandits, robbed villagers of their property and enslaved them Their reputation around the world has become extremely embarrassing. In the past, it was revered as a powerful and glorious warrior nation City 1. The border town of Olesia Woods: Going up to the cliff is a small town, and it is too close to humans. Warcraft is basically not present, and all kinds of medicinal materials have been collected by adventurers. Very close to the town Off the beaten path 2. Ashenil City Location: the center of the Ecasta Plain Title: 1. One of the '50 most livable cities in the world' 2. 'Golden Mountain City' 3. 'The Land of Eternal Spring' Status: a major transportation town Economy 1. Avenella Well-connected mountain roads connect remote hunting towns closer to the Tambur Mountains. Hunters, mercenaries, adventurers and traveling traders transport the bits and pieces they obtain to Ashenil, sold to the large merchant guild stationed here. Once every three months, the chambers of commerce that have collected enough materials will gather together and dispatch a large joint carriage team. Transport these magical items obtained from various types of monsters; rare medicinal and magical plants; monster babies and eggs, products, and various ores to wider places. ①There is a hunting town near the Tambur Mountains ②Hunters, mercenaries, adventurers and traveling merchants transport goods to Ashenil City 1. Transportation time: once every 3 months 2. Transportation method: dispatch a large joint carriage team. 1. Composition: Travelers, merchants, scattered adventurers, mercenaries 2. Special methods: 1. Bring two or three manned carriages, collect travel expenses and earn some extra money. 2. For mercenaries: a daily salary higher than that for normal guard tasks, and simple food at the same time 3. Transportation goods: magical items obtained from various types of monsters; rare medicinal and magical plants; monster babies and eggs, products and various ores 4. Security level: relatively high, with a small number of thieves attacking 5. Participation method: test Content: Fighting with unarmored wooden weapons, knocking down three or more opponents without getting injured is considered qualified. Time: Usually three days before the caravan departs Participants: Anyone How to participate: Simply sign up ③ There are large chambers of commerce stationed in Ashenil City ④ Chambers of commerce in various places Each major chamber of commerce usually has its own escort team But divide the escort team into two, half stay in the local area of the chamber of commerce and the other half guard the convoy 2. Usually have their own escort team Usage method 1. Divide the escort team in two, half stay in the local area of the chamber of commerce and the other half guard the convoy 2. All stay in the local area of the chamber of commerce Transportation 3. Avenella ①The mountain roads are well developed ②If you look down from above, this important transportation town, which is the lifeblood of the kingdom, and the surrounding scenery will look like an irregular spider web. 3 Honey toast 2. Brown bread Most adventurers and mercenaries eat it all year round Slang: Brown bread is a hard wooden pillow, while honey toast is a fragrant velvet pillow

I was quite shocked that the world designed by the author turned out to be like this. This map was drawn by Roy in 2016 I believe that many book friends who have been reading know this map I found it during archeology in the book club at 11:03 on April 22, 2022 It is touching, not only the author's knowledge but also the author's six years of persistence Educational Thank you for your efforts A blunt application of a sentence from "Chen Qing Biao": I would like to express my gratitude to you Although the above text is not an expression                                      April 23, 2022 0:23

In a sense, I'm really lucky. I found a book that I couldn't find 😁 out of nowhere.

The map drawn by Roy in 2016 may be slightly different from the current setting

The circulation of good books is restricted, and junk books are poisoned every day It can only be called a unique skill

I couldn't find it in the Good Guy app, nor on the web version. Finally, I connected to the Internet via VPN and found it. This website takes jujube pills.

This quality of persistence shines like gold

Today I was looking through the bookshelf and came across this book, and I felt a little mixed (laughs). The first time I saw this book was in 2018. I thought it was good and ordered it all. The author was still updating it every day at that time, although it would occasionally stop updating for a few days. After reading it, I did not read it again. When I picked up this book again in 20 years, I had almost forgotten the previous plot, so I read it again and noticed that the update frequency had dropped. At that time, I thought that this book might also be about eunuchs. Then today, I read this book again after more than three years. I am very pleased that it is still being updated. However, I did not expect that the update speed is even slower than it was 20 years ago. In three years, I only updated it for more than 20 yuan (wry smile). However, due to various reasons, the author has already used love to generate electricity, so I can't say much more, I can only express my hard work here. It has been more than seven years since the serialization of the novel began. The author's life must have changed a lot, but since I have persisted in writing until now, please continue writing and give the story a happy ending. I am also ready to start revisiting this book again 😄

This book is one of the few that reminds me to start a new chapter. I saw the reminder 11 minutes ago and posted a book review 11 minutes later. I just hope you can see and know that there is someone who has been chasing books to support you.

I remember that it was four years ago. I was in a rented room, holding a porcelain bowl in one hand and my mother's mobile phone in the other. I had questions that I couldn't answer in name, but in fact I was reading your novel. I remember that the light was bright yellow and I was in my third year of high school. It was the only time during that time when I could secretly let my imagination run wild. I was very happy and grateful to come across your book. I'm sorry. I didn't have money at the time. Although I don't have much now, I will make up for it. Come on, the light in my memory

After a few months of book shortage, I am reading novels in class again, and the author has to bear the blame! I really like the increasingly fleshed-out world and characters written by the author. I think I will take it seriously and encourage the author with a small reward. Come on, I must not stop updating!

Just a guy named Heng. The plot of Heng's uncle traveling around the world (America) with a girl named Luo always reminds me of another story.

I can't find it directly in the APP. I can't find it until I open the APP on the web version. Exaggeration.

Can you share how you found this book?

I think it's better to give up if real life is stressful. The novels I like are usually relatively niche. Unfortunately, I really like your novel, so it is considered niche. In fact, it is very clear from a third party's perspective how well the novel is written and how good the results are. I believe you know it yourself. After roughly browsing Qidian's best-selling novels, you should know that you are dead. This is the general trend and has nothing to do with individual excellence. After all, the current main readers, or the main financiers, are just like this. What can you do? The West has been developing for such a long time, but the mainstream of movies is still not vulgar movies? Comrades like lower-level people, and you have to prove that you are good in Yangchunbaixue. I can only say that you are trying your best in the wrong place. If you write a good article to prove yourself, it depends on who you want to prove it to. Different ways don't work together. What you write is not a vulgar novel, but you want to pursue results. You are just flirting with a blind man. Articles are based on whether you are close friends or not. The scope of your close friends, the author, is obviously a small group of readers. The pursuit of dreams depends on the actual situation. If you don't look at the situation, it may just be a dream. Be tough on yourself and go see the scenery elsewhere first.

Such a good book, why did Qidian block this book?

As expected of a book written 10 years ago, it has a literary flavor and the beauty of an economic boom period.

I like! Sorry, there are no words to describe how much I love this article! ! !