Hero Killing Shop System

I read the book Long Shao posted in the reader group, and came here to take a look. I think it's okay. I liked playing hero killing in the past two years, but I've read this type of novel before. Personally, I think this type of urban superpower novel is okay. After reading the first three chapters, I feel that the explanation in the first chapter is okay. By the end of the chapter, The second chapter is a bit anxious, and the writing is a bit panicky. The protagonist's personality, emotions, etc. Change a bit quickly. It feels like the protagonist's personality has been changed all at once. How should I put it, like a 15-year-old child, suddenly turned into an evil and mature uncle. Please pay attention to the modification [fn=2_11]

Because the previous one was so bad, I decided to overthrow it and rewrite it today. I hope it will give everyone a very good story. Thank you to those who tolerated me.