Immortal Yun Zhuan

With more than 10 million words, the author is still first-rate, awesome and perseverant.

I've read a few chapters and at least the writing is good.

This book has no three views All kinds of powerful people are rushing to be the protagonist's slave, a dragon king. The king of the dragon tribe crosses the interface to find the protagonist, just to chat with the protagonist. When they meet, he asks the protagonist to take off his clothes. The protagonist undresses and the dragon king becomes paralyzed on the ground and begs to be taken in to become the master's slave. Moreover, the stronger the protagonist's team, the more people he accepts. How do the slaves under him show off to others and become slaves? Others also envy and want to be slaves. Cultivation is to cultivate the mind. Can a spineless bitch become a strong man? It makes me sick to my stomach. Slaves can only be normal if they defeat their enemies and force others to become slaves.

There are many descriptions of men having sex with each other in this book. Basically, they are pairs of fat men with a lot of hair on their bodies having sex with each other. Fat men have children, fat men have steamed buns on their chests with holes under them, fat men do drag dances, fat men wear see-through clothes, old people have sex with each other, and father-in-law and son-in-law have sex with each other. I have read Danmei's novels before, but none of them have such unlimited limits.

I haven't read the book yet, but seeing so many people criticizing the author, the results are not very good, and the author can continue writing as usual. Admire

This review really makes me laugh to death. A LV1 writer wrote 12 million words and is still LV1. I laugh to death. Damn it.

If there were no gays and gays, this would be a magical book. If there were gays and gays, I wouldn't be able to read it at all.

The most unpleasant thing is that the protagonist wants to change the other world in this or that way because everyone is equal, and then it does not benefit him at all. The most important thing is, are everyone really equal in real life?

What made the author write? Is it love?

The biggest flaw of this book is that the sex is too disgusting. I suspect that the author is lonely and a pervert. Even if you want to write about hermaphroditism, don't describe it in such detail. I have only read dozens of chapters and I feel like vomiting after reading this.

The idea is good, but the imagination is too big and the three views are incorrect.

Thirteen million words, a first-class writer? 😲

It was okay for the first 500 chapters, but then it became s***, too heavy-handed, and I couldn't stand it until I reached chapter 1,000. Please change it, author.

Where to file a complaint? Will such a perverted book not be sealed? Disgusting

Hey, others are fast food and cool articles. This is just a cold drink, it has no taste at all. Made by a robot?

It's over 10 million words, and the author is still only a first-level author

This protagonist has bad views. If he wants something, he just steals it. He never thinks of getting it from formal channels. L

Is this a fairy tale novel or an urban crime-solving romance drama? How disgusting! A lot of women can't live without the protagonist

What kind of magical book is this? I have collected it and dare not read it.

There are many gay plots in this book😰😰😰

I just read the title and it has more than 4,000 chapters. I thought I would be happy to read it. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that my intelligence is not enough. If I really finish reading 4000 chapters, I feel that my IQ will become negative when Einstein comes.

The author has writing skills, but his ability to conceive plots is relatively weak, the pace is slow and redundant, some descriptions are childish, and some plots are unbelievable. For example, Tianfeng will go out and record what he has done, and the information can be revealed in other ways. The cultivation novel also lacks decisiveness in killing, and the pig's feet are too sentimental. The description of the female characters' personalities is even less heroic. These may be related to the author's life experience pattern. As the author said in the preface, this book comforts the world and comforts his wandering and rootless soul. It can be regarded as writing a book and establishing a statement, leaving a name in history.

The beginning ruins everything

It's not an ordinary brain-opening one. It's a brain from a technological universe. No matter how low your IQ is, you should have a sense of technology. However, it turned out to be an androgynous homosexual model, which is a bit unbearable. I feel that this is not a fairy tale, and the author is really not an ordinary person.

You have a lot of words, so you are right! I rushed in to see if it was poisonous! ! Let's see how many days I can hold on🤓

There are more than 1,400 words, so few book reviews. Let's read it before commenting.

It's rare… I'll omit 10,000 words of emotion here! Well written! Come on

I just started watching it. I felt good after reading the introduction. I signed in first.

What a great book... Omit 10,000 words

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.