The Unrivaled Cauldron Pill Venerable

It always feels like the villains all over the world are surrounding the protagonist, and the whole world is targeting the protagonist. One person can do it all over the world, and he still wins. Purely retarded. If a person is the enemy of the whole world, there is something wrong with that person himself.

The protagonist pretends to be cool and behaves like no ordinary person. This kind of gangster-like personality successfully persuaded him to quit.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, these villains are so stupid. They all know that the male protagonist can shake three mountains, but they want to make elixirs at the same time as the male protagonist.

I think Qinglian's book is pretty good, why is there no one here 😭

The rest of the content progresses very quickly😭The ending is a bit rushed

Young man, you won't change jobs, right?

This book mainly has a lot of typos, but overall it's okay.

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After watching half of it, it was pretty good. The plot was okay, I felt refreshed when I changed it, and it didn't lose my wits. The world background is very large, and there are also mysterious foreshadowings (as long as there is an explanation later, it won't be unfinished). Moreover, the author originally "seems" to have the idea of ​​writing a follow-up, or this is a follow-up, like "Covering the Sky". All in all, if the book later explains the protagonist's "what his father deduced and saw, who harmed the protagonist in his previous life, and why the protagonist's soul traveled to this era," this book is basically a masterpiece! Although the voice expression ability is a bit lacking, the plot is really perfect, at least in the first half. As long as the words in "" are explained in the later stage, it will at least be a T2-level novel! I just don't understand that there are so few people watching it and basically no comments. Is it because there is no publicity?

After reading the beginning, I found it extremely childish. I saw a group of middle school teenagers pretending to be cool and slapping people in the face. This book is purely to disgust people.