General Lie of the Tang Dynasty

After reading the first dozens of chapters, to be honest, I really disliked the character of the princess, which even made me have the urge to abandon the book. And judging from the comments, the princess is still dead. People who were originally unhappy with the princess may have abandoned the book, but now they are unhappy with the people who like this character. Isn't this a double-edged deal?

1. The description of battle scenes needs to be improved. I feel that the author does not seem to know much about cold weapon combat, and the performance is a bit fantasy and a bit of a trick; we can learn from the works that are generally recognized as good in this aspect; 2. The whole article so far gives me the feeling of watching an anti-war movie with the main theme. For example: it blindly emphasizes the protagonist's overly idealistic belief in defending the country in his two previous lives, and political commissar-like language appears from time to time, which seems to be divorced from reality. The premature stereotype of the protagonist will affect the future process; 3. Some plots and details are questionable. For example, the handling of portable space is a typical solution that sacrifices everyone's IQ, including the cheat-finger setting of a strange body. These are obviously preparations for the protagonist to raid and kill all directions alone in the future. This simplifies the process, reduces the difficulty of writing, and achieves the purpose of being happy and refreshing, but is this really what readers need? It is better to replace the basics with the basics and solve the problem of loyalty together with the system; Finally, don't write emotional scenes.

If you want to travel through history with just a little bit of martial arts, you can do it, but if you want to travel through history, you can't accept anything that involves systems or fantasy.

I don't know what the author was thinking. Although he didn't like the princess many times in the early stage, she would help the pig every time something happened later. She was also a woman who dared to love and hate. There must be many readers who didn't like this princess in the early stage. I don't like it either. But around chapter 100, the author directly kills the princess. You are trying to please the previous readers, but have you considered the readers who will slowly accept this princess with peace of mind. Anyway, I saw that this princess was forced to write by the author and she abandoned the book after her death. Personally, I feel that the author will definitely arrange a Tang female pig's trotter later. Maybe he was born into a noble family and was helpful to the pig's feet. But arranging the death of this princess is really heartbreaking.

After seeing Chapter 929, I just couldn't bear it anymore! I want to say a few words, the emperor is fatuous! Eunuchs are in power! Loyal ministers die! The people are in dire straits! The protagonist, a time traveler, says that the emperor's suspicion is not a reason for rebellion. The question is - is it just suspicion? Are there any loyal ministers left who worked with the protagonist? I want to ask - what is the protagonist insisting on? For the sake of the king, who wants the minister to die, the minister has to die? Are you sorry for your status as a time traveler; for the people of Tang Dynasty? But the people are in dire straits, wars continue, and the number of people is reduced by half! What is the protagonist thinking? The author wants to establish the protagonist as a capable, capable, loyal and patriotic minister! But the country is in chaos and the people are miserable! Most people in the Tang Dynasty lived miserable lives! The country will be destroyed! The protagonist hides in a corner, develops a small kingdom, and defends the ignorant king with righteousness! I'm confused! ! ! What kind of person does the author want to establish the protagonist as? ? ?

I feel that many books are not worthy of a unruly and willful woman, so I would not write them and abandon them.

The previous chapter looked good, I thought I encountered fairy grass, but unexpectedly it turned into a poisonous weed...,,, Especially when I saw chapters 113...114, Where the princess was written to death, I was not in the mood to read it, it was too poisonous! ! ! ! !

Traveling back to the middle of the Tang Dynasty during the reign of Emperor Xuanzong, before the Anshi Rebellion, he used the super-powerful Golden Finger to conquer the world, but he devoted himself to being a slave of the Li family of the Tang Dynasty, and he said he was so noble and loyal to the emperor, haha! Even though he was suppressed by the Li family, he did not resist. He also helped the Li family stabilize the world. In the end, he was forced to leave the land of China and go to the west to establish a kingdom and conquer the western countries. I really wanted to curse when I saw this. The book repeatedly said that he was a loyal minister and how great he was. Author, you are loyal to the Li family, and you are also protecting the rights and honor of the Li family. Luxury, wealth and honor have nothing to do with the people of the world. In the middle and late Tang Dynasty, the annexation of land by aristocratic families became more and more serious, and the people were in dire straits. As a result, in the following Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, the people of the world lived a life worse than pigs and dogs. This is the Li family that you protected in the Tang Dynasty. Later, when you went to the west to build a kingdom, you thought that by eliminating future troubles, the Li family would be able to sit still? You have established such a powerful country, so your descendants will not return to the Central Plains? What else do you say to ensure that you are a loyal minister of the Li family, and your descendants will not know it. If I go, there will be no war when your descendants return to the Central Plains? Peace has always been achieved through war. Hum, author, no matter whether your writing skills are good or not, you are still a dog of the Li family. Don't think of yourself as so noble.

In the early Tang Dynasty chapter, this book was fine, but in Tamar's book, all the mages came out at the end, which was completely random writing.

Tell the truth, Chapter 2: Persuading the Author to Quit. Did you set the protagonist as a military general or a charger? In the first line, Chapter 2 showed up. A wound has healed and the scars are gone. How about leaving a scar? You see that general, with his tender skin and tender flesh. If you tell me, no one will believe that you have been on the battlefield.

After reading a few chapters, I no longer want to read anymore! Another one with a gold finger and space, it's so fake!

In fact, the author makes this princess become a general, which makes people feel uncomfortable! It's not that women can't be generals! But you can't just find a female supporting role for the male lead!

Damn, you have to look up English words after reading the introduction, which means reading novels can also improve your English skills.

If you don't know how to write a romantic drama, don't write it. Just arrange for a foreign princess later, and then look at his brother's letter saying that a foreign princess cannot be his wife. You're crazy. You don't know what's going on in your family? Your brother is in someone else's territory, what kind of plot do you arrange? There will probably be many more inexplicable settings later, 88

I saw Chapter 113, why did the princess die, a female lead who didn't even have enough appearances? Inexplicably, are readers being driven away randomly? The author's plot is like shit

Chapter 411 I post the exact same article twice and get paid twice. Is this okay for the author?

In fact, there is a loophole in this book, that is, someone else bandaged him when he was injured. How do you explain it when you see that his wound is intact?

After reading the comments, I found that it has more than a thousand chapters and it has already spread to Europe and America while Japan is still there 😅😅

It looks good from the front, but I can't stand it anymore when I see the back without usurping the position.

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Wu Zongpei, a native of Xuzhou, has been a disciple of the master since he was a child. He is an expert with a spear. He was seriously injured in the battle to save the master, and then followed the protagonist. He has a lively personality, and the best ending is to die defending the city.

In addition to fiefdom, the protagonist can also buy more surrounding land and implement a Mintun Manor-style agricultural cooperative + knight system.