The Century of Immortals and Demons in Shushan

Hehe. I went to the new book and said something. The author was banned because he didn't have a finished novel.

I stopped watching the early version after watching it, and it was confirmed that it was plagiarized.

Plagiarism or not, it doesn't really matter, as long as the protagonist's character is a bit stupid.

There are no character attribute panels in more than 30 online games.

This book has almost 900 chapters and only 39 posts? Is it because I got stuck and didn't get it out? The worst one before seemed to have more than 400 posts, and it only had 200 chapters.

At the beginning, the top players were just like you, and the author was very distressed, but now that he has signed, it is also worth 2.78 Million. It's great to sign, as long as you keep writing, there are so many people supporting you, and you will definitely sign within 300,000 words. Come on, encourage each other, new authors of new books at the same time.

There is no way to see it, the fifth-level flying sword can be produced directly on the first day. Just write it down

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I had 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for a signature, but unfortunately it didn't pass. Of course, now I'm lucky enough to have been notified of the contract and signed the contract. But even so, I also know that I still have many shortcomings, and I also want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book Title: The Trial of Infinite Death Thank you!

Chapter 6, you're welcome. [Fn=3_11]

Is there any essence? Actually, I really have no interest in romance in online games. Let the heroine's presence be diluted

It's been a long time since I've found a well-written book in the online game fairy tale style. Come on, author!

"Does anyone read the advertisement? Please kind-hearted readers, please take a look." The little girl said this sentence with difficulty in coughing in the cold wind and trembling slightly. She couldn't imagine how her stepmother would treat her if she hadn't watched "I Open a Brothel in the Tang Dynasty" because of her advertisement. She was beaten again inhumanely. At this time, she hoped that someone would take a look at her advertisement. Please kind-hearted readers, please take a look.

Did you explain the character ID in Chapter 1?

You said you need to go beyond level 100 to kill monsters with ordinary or elite templates, forget it. But the one I killed was the BOSS. That's too much, right?

The beginning of the book is undoubtedly imitated by Qingcheng Sword Immortal, and the author also admits this. The plot is a bit monotonous, the details are too simple, and the most annoying thing is that it's too YY. At the beginning, it was just that he was recognized by Master Yuxu and accepted as his disciple, and became the descendant of Master Yuanshi. Then he got 10 times the mana, which was outrageous. On the way to the desert, I was able to collect a body that was over level 500. I was speechless. Can other people still play? This is when we reach levels 5 and 60 😰. It is recommended that the author imitate some of the writing methods of Qingcheng Sword Fairy instead of simply imitating the plot. I love this type of novels and have also read Shushan, Qingcheng Sword Immortal, Xiu Dao Qi Lu, and Dao Dao Xing, and I think these novels are the best of this type of novels. However, the author is quite brave to write this kind of book, and I hope the author can innovate and create new masterpieces👍. My purpose is not to blame the author, but to point out the shortcomings, hoping to be useful to the author.

I feel like the golden finger is a bit too big, and there are still a lot of imitations later on. Chief disciple, these feelings are unnecessary

Brother is so fast! It's a pity that I'm still hanging around in hell, haha ​​😄

Yesterday I spent two and a half hours enjoying all the completed chapters. I can responsibly tell the author that the traces of imitating Qingcheng Jianxian in your article are too obvious. Although you have replaced the wine with a new one, the image of the bottle is too obvious. No matter how new or good the wine is, it will be attacked as plagiarism. The author portrays a low-key and somewhat vain rich second-generation protagonist who is content with a small amount of money, but the reader lacks a sense of involvement. Although the smooth storyline adds a lot of points to the author, the unreasonable cheating makes the protagonist's strength disconnected from the plot arrangement, making it feel like playing a stand-alone game with modifiers. In fact, the author has taken a new path, that is, one method can defeat ten thousand swords. In the past, most Shushanliu novels focused on fairy swords and magic weapons. Now the author focuses on magic, especially thunder magic, which is refreshing. If we get something new in the Five Elements, it will better arouse the readers' appetite, which will also prepare us for opening a few more maps in the future.

The goddess backup complex is so disgusting, isn't it? If you are so rich, you still care about one or two beautiful girls? Studying well is of no use, is it the protagonist's family that begs that girl's family or something? And the protagonist is so rich playing games that he actually wants to make money? If you don't find someone from a group to level up, you'll have to work so hard on your own. I've been playing games for so many years, except when I'm showing off, and I've basically been leveling up, and I don't have any money. Why don't you spend your own money to buy good equipment, or hire someone to collect game currency? Are you sure this is the second generation?

Why is this book very similar to Qidao? One is from the Qingcheng sect with the Sword Style, the other is from the Kunlun Refining Style, and the adventures of the disciples are all monkey wine tasks. The thunder I learned in the early stage is also incomplete. I don't know who copied who.