Cultivation in Seclusion

I copied Huang Jingxiuzhen's "My Will is Happy", can I write it myself properly?

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Why does the protagonist become emotionally involved when he sees Situ Meng and others? Wouldn't it be better if you could describe it. What I have seen so far is that Situ Meng is better at acting coquettishly. Is it because of this? When you accept a disciple and make a friend, you must also consider your character. Let's observe more, right?

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The book is good, and 3 recommendation votes have been sent. I hope that my original intention will not change!

There are constant adventures. I really don't understand that only the protagonist can encounter those adventures, and they happen one after another without interruption. Others have never noticed a trace...

Sorry, I have just refined it, but it will still be deleted even if I select multiple options to delete it. The following two comments: Article 1: To restore the prosperous age of cultivation, the protagonist wants to rebel. At that time, the truth was that the weak preyed on the strong. Article 2: This kind of novel is easy to collapse

Even if it is to pave the way for the rest of the story, there is no need to write down the supporting characters or even the passers-by in such detail and complexity. It actually takes several chapters! It is enough to be concise and to the point. Overly detailed and excessive foreshadowing is just writing!

Chapter 1 Chen Yu is 21 years old, not only in elementary school, middle school, high school, university, but also has dozens of jobs! ! ! Question... At what age did I go to school? For example, I was in elementary school at seven, in the first year of junior high school at fourteen, and graduated from high school at seventeen. After three years of high school, plus four years of college, I felt like I could graduate at the age of 21 and have worked dozens of jobs. Am I a child prodigy? ? ? ?