Super Red Servant

Let it be nurtured for a while first, and then come back next week to kill it, otherwise it will not be enough to watch. The author needs to slowly develop the plot outside. If you stay in Qingyang City, you will lose readers. Speed ​​up the plot development~~~

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He seems to be a busboy at the inn 🤫

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The cover of JA DING... Says it! What is your relationship with Lao Yu?

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When I saw Xian Ding for the first time, I felt that it was 320,000 words long and had not been published yet. No, but my experience still misled me. From the beginning, I knew that Xian Ding was my favorite type. It was not a simple novel, and the plot was also super big-picture. The author's overall view was very good, but it has not been developed so far. Take your time. The character description is also very vivid and detailed. I really like Liu Dazhuang in the article. He is a great man. Haha, come on! ! ! Author! ! ! Roll over! ! ! Author! ! !

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What is the name of this book?

Two people sleep, In the middle of the night, four legs, Covering the quilt, Sweating, ride on it, Can't pull it out, Don't let go for a long time, Really comfortable. This. . . .

Well written, I encourage 13 votes. Cheers to the author! 🌹

After reading Xian Ding, I found that I still have a lot to learn and improve. The book is a good book, and new writers should read it here!

No book is perfect. Recently, I found in the book review area that readers have raised many small bugs, and they have been corrected one by one. In order to improve the reading experience, and readers can ask questions at any time, you can post in this building. . . The mountain has no edges, and the heaven and earth are united. This super popular little servant must become more and more interesting.

This post is not a one-size-fits-all post, and it's very tiring for me to write it for so long. I like the author's novels very much. I can feel that the author has strong language control ability and there is a lot worth learning. After reading all the updates, there are still many highlights in the author's novels: the creation of characters, whether the protagonist, heroine or supporting characters, is very distinctive and full. The protagonist is shrewd, powerful, humorous, and poisonous, and the heroine is sexy. The characteristics of the supporting characters are also very distinctive. Although there are many characters, there does not seem to be much pressure on the author. This is something worth learning for me personally; the humorous language style makes the image of the characters more vivid, especially It is a humorous language that is life-like, allowing readers to unconsciously step into the role, increasing the reader's sense of involvement; the sense of rhythm is very good, from the beginning to chapter 19, you can feel the author's grasp of the plot, and the relaxation and relaxation. Each story is arranged just right. Starting from small conflicts, the level of conflicts continues to increase. As the conflicts intensify, the protagonist continues to break through the conflicts, and the protagonist's growth seems natural. Generally speaking, there is still a lot to learn from the author. I have a few personal suggestions: Main line: The author's novel should be based on the growth of the characters, and any such main line should be driven by a strong internal cause, but the protagonist in the author's novel does not have this internal cause. From the introduction of the novel, "The protagonist's ideal is to become the first steward in the capital, but a group of people are crying and asking him to become a general...", It can be seen that the author's starting point may be to create a protagonist who grows up passively. Others ask the protagonist to do everything. If it is such a protagonist, there is no need for internal factors to drive it. However, through reading the novel, it is found that the protagonist has passivity, but More plots reflect the initiative of the protagonist, so that readers will have a different understanding of the protagonist during the reading process. For example: "The protagonist takes the initiative to investigate Li Dafu and wants to pay; in order to become the second-in-command of Wangyue Restaurant, he takes the initiative to show his abilities..." These plots do not reflect the passivity of the protagonist. On the contrary, they give readers a very proactive protagonist. Therefore, it is recommended to consider the passivity of the protagonist, for example, "Li Dafu cried and shouted to pay off the debt when he didn't know who took action, and was appointed as the lobby when the protagonist was unwilling...". Or if the author wants to create a proactive protagonist, then find an internal cause for the protagonist and change the introduction. As for other plot ideas, I hope the author will update them more. If I have any ideas later, I will tell you immediately.