Painting the Landscape with a Stroke

The plot is dull and lacks any excitement; how can it possibly attract readers' interest? The illustrations are completely uncreative; is it interesting to just draw mountains, rivers, flowers, and trees? And this is supposed to be a time traveler from Earth? Couldn't you draw figures from Chinese mythology, strange beasts from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, ghosts and monsters…? Since it's a fantasy novel, can't you unleash your imagination? Can't you write some more fantastical stories?

I'll just say one thing: why didn't Tiancan Tudou report you? It's just missing the saying, "Thirty years east of the river, thirty years west of the river; never underestimate a young man's potential."

It seems okay, but there are some parts that don't quite make sense.

Wow, he opened two accounts and left the exact same comments.

Why couldn't the author have drawn a diagram of the universe and the planets' movements?

The protagonist seems a bit too kind.

The eleven-year-old protagonist goes to the blacksmith's shop to sell talisman paintings. The protagonist's intelligence is questionable.

As usual, I'm here to check in and give you some encouragement!

As usual, I'm here to report in and cheer on the Abyss!

As usual, I'm here to check in and give you some encouragement!