Fantasy Contract from Another World

Too much private content? ? ? ? ? You should just write the plot honestly. There are too many fake stories, and I skipped reading. It only took me less than 15 seconds to read one chapter.

It's so beautiful, [fn=2_1]

I looked at the title of the book and saw that it was a genre I liked very much. I came in and immediately kneeled down 😢. What do you want to explain about this work? You don't have to write it down in the text! ! ! I can't read it for the time being, I hope the author will work harder. Come back later 😎

But this content. . There is not much text, the whole article is full of complaints. Are you a complainer?😆

It's better to change it, it's very unfriendly to newcomers! If you don't add your own opinions, it would be better than changing him into the protagonist's soliloquy! I kept adding some unknown voice-over and it instantly became a drama~! [Fn=4_5]Perspective is important

I am changing and growing and you will witness it.

Do I vote every day? ! [Fn=4_4]If you don't receive it, you will vote for it later! In vain...

Author, your chapter names are too confusing. When you click on the impression, you can see that it has become an ant nest. Can you change the chapter names? Let's fatten up and read and collect.

I re-watched it on a whim today, and tried to fill my head with water while watching it? Removed the author's complaints and the like, and found out? ? ? ? ? Damn it, you have to remove the watery content in 5 chapters to have the amount of plot in 1 chapter! ! ! This data, nothing else. When I read a novel, I looked at the plot, and then I read a paragraph of explanatory text. This is worse than a TV series with commercial breaks. Therefore, I personally suggest that you completely revise the front part and remove all the irritants. Although there are fewer chapters, it will not be so awkward when you read it. The author's subject matter is quite good, and I don't want to ruin it like this.

The lack of recommendation votes for a book is not a problem of the readers, but the reason should be found within oneself. I clicked on this book and burst out laughing when I saw the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. What does it mean that the beginning is not important? No one saw the beginning? Does the author really know how to write novels? The beginning is the most important thing about a book! It's a bad beginning, but you still expect someone to read your book? Joke! People won't even listen to what you say next! Anyway, this is the first time I have seen an author say that the beginning is nothing more than this and nothing more than that, haha.

It's okay to travel through a world that's random, but it's problematic to have no purpose. The main line is to collect summons, but each world is too aimless! How about learning how to send a mission from the Lord God, or what you need to collect for time travel....[Fn=4_10]

I really can't figure out what the author's writing method is. There is no need to emphasize rationality when it comes to time travel, but you can't write it in a spoof. There is only a little bit of practical information in each chapter, and it does not affect the readability at a glance. The author said in the first chapter that he recommends reading from more than forty chapters. Isn't this a sign of lack of confidence or irresponsibility? If the author really feels that there are problems with the previous chapters, he might as well overhaul or rewrite them. The current situation is to chase people away. Looking at the book review area, there are many people who find it inexplicable. Also, Akala is the blind eye, not the great eye

If you have any supporting roles, you can post them, and there are many time-travel plots that you want to watch, such as your favorite novels, animations, games, and movies. Except for the world where the ten contract objects in the main line are not modified for the time being, You can also travel through many worlds. If there are any good things or things you want that I don't know about, you can travel there and get them. I can modify the contract items if I have any recommendations, as long as it exceeds what I decided on myself. At that time, I was arranging the plot.