Whispers of Doom

The direction of the story is still very interesting. If you read it carefully, it feels good. The relationship between the characters is also very attractive. Now I especially want to know what is the relationship between Hua Xuyao ​​and redemption, what is the relationship between Marcel and redemption, and what is the ability of redemption? Of course, there are problems. The author does have a good story, but he doesn't seem to have tried his best to make it perfect, which really makes me feel a little pity. The work is not an updated novel, nor is it like a normal novel. It focuses more on the psychological portrayal of the characters, and the supporting evidence for some information is also good. To be honest, this work is more suitable for filming a TV series than a novel. Although it looks interesting, relatively speaking, the further you read, the more tired you become. There are too few fighting scenes! What a sonorous name Doomsday Whispers, why did it turn into a detective novel when it comes to you! ? In addition, hurry up and write out the characters' memories. How many foreshadowings have you buried? Every chapter of "Windless Night" and "The Secret of You and Me" is foreshadowing. I won't do it if it continues like this! I accidentally said too much, but come on, come on! 🤭

"The Whispering of the Doomsday" is a book that after reading it, it was hard not to love it. I really liked it! Speaking of the experience of reading this book, it is really a bit tortuous. As an old bookworm who has been hiding in online novels for many years, I have read all kinds of books in the past few years, including romance, fantasy, military, urban, time travel, etc. I can't even remember the books I have read. To be honest, when I see those kinds of fast-food articles, casual articles, and word-count articles now, I sneer at them. I often lament that the online literary world has reached the point where it is so difficult to find a single book. A large novel with a compact plot, rigorous structure, and vivid characters. This rare science fiction makes people happy. Characters such as Hai Dai, Redemption, Hua Xuyao, etc. Are all very unique, including cold-blooded killers, old police officers, beautiful women bickering, etc. Especially the various superpowers, such as copying ability, mental manipulation ability, shielding ability, ability to generate electricity, etc., Are really dizzying. The book is generally good, but there are still some minor problems. For example, some paragraphs are too long. If there are no special requirements for online articles, it is best to keep a paragraph between two or three lines, so that it will be easier to read. It's best to fix the words in chapters. It's best to keep one chapter around 3,000 words. However, these are all matters related to online writing skills and are all my personal feelings. If I say something wrong, just treat it as if I didn't say it. Overall, I like this book very much and will continue to read it. I believe that good novels, regardless of subject matter, person, or structure, as long as they are attentive, will produce excellent works. This is what the current Internet writers lack. Writing these feelings can be regarded as encouraging each other with the author! Come on!

If you read it carefully, you will have a very profound feeling that no protagonist is defiant, and no character is invincible. All events seem to be very real, and everything must be done realistically. Indeed, victory may come suddenly, but so does failure. In the work, the dialogue and psychology between the characters are the most portrayed. Each character has flesh and blood. For example, the protagonist's redemption has a character that is always at two extremes. One is the belief in protecting his companions and protecting the vast majority of human beings. In addition, he is also unreasonably demanding and unruly towards his companions, as if he has no roots at all. Emotions that should not be integrated into one are tightly intertwined in this novel like coffee and milk. Personally, I feel that the words of redemption are the biggest highlight of this book. Many of his words seem to find clear hope in a desperate situation. At the same time, the words of redemption are also like helpless self-mockery in a desperate situation. It's a very good book, the plot is great, but the writing is a bit poor, and the writing is not perfect in some places. I look forward to your progress!

I am a very lazy person. I have been reading novels for five or six years, and I rarely leave long comments. I have been following Da Da Da's articles for a while. They are updated quickly and have good literary talent. I am really embarrassed to continue to sink in silently like this, so I have to come here to write a few inner thoughts, which can be considered as a way to attract others. The protagonist of each novel will become a strong man in their world, or dominate the world with martial arts, or possess supernatural powers, or be impoverished, and there will also be beautiful women who throw themselves into their arms. This kind of life is the life that many people yearn for. Therefore, although every novel inevitably falls into clichés, it caters to the public's taste. If there is demand, there will be a market. And some aspects of the author's "Doomsday Whisper" really made me feel fresh and new! First of all, regardless of anything else, just in terms of writing style and conception, this novel already belongs to the category of quality. The novel is cleverly conceived and has a compact plot. I liked it very much. Not to mention those sci-fi words, even I was eager to read it, and really wanted to write one myself. Of course, I don't have such writing skills and strong creative ability, I can only think about it. In the beginning, Hai Dai sneaks into the cell to kill the superpower No. 47 And later in the psychedelic dream in the abandoned subway station. Whether it is the character dialogue or the psychological description, it is so sensible. I haven't seen this kind of science fiction for a long time. Every time I see it, The important plot, a character's words, and an action made me feel as if I was actually there. A saber cutting a bullet in half, a graceful gesture of doing a split leg, and a smiling but ruthless scene all give me endless aftertaste now!