Heart of the Temple

This is the race setting in DND, which means that humans have strong learning and reception capabilities. At the same time, the attributes of the human race are average compared to other races, neither outstanding nor low. All basic professions are competent, so any basic profession can be regarded as a talent profession. The author's setting in this article (Chapter 32) is that there is no experience penalty for working in multiple occupations, which is contrary to common sense. A person's energy is limited, can he work in many occupations and still improve at the same speed as normal?

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Let's not talk about the sense of déjà vu, but let's talk about character design. Some of the previous characters seem very dry, whether it's dialogue or characterization, they are written as if they were NPCs rather than real people. Especially for Arroyo, it feels like the protagonist becomes so domineering that he accepts his boss as his younger brother, which is very reluctant. But I think that in the end, the most successful branch story was Arroyo. There are past events, interactions with various characters, and conflicts with Raymond's different ways of doing things and personality. The growth can be seen step by step, and a golden finger is given. This is the template for the protagonist. I think this part is much more brilliant than the part about Finn. Raymond, in the early stage, was too middle-class and I didn't really like it. The branch plot was well written, with bottom lines and compromises, his own judgment and suppressed outbursts, but the forced bond with the half-elf Lolita was a bit reluctant. The protagonist, the set character, the set character, the feeling of being unchanged, to put it simply, it is not vivid enough, it feels like a textbook, step by step Sheen, there are past events, conflicts, pursuits, and struggles. Although he doesn't have many roles, he is remembered by people right away. Female characters To be honest, I think the portrayal of several female characters is quite unsuccessful. Lilith conforms to the original setting, but looks more like a prop than a human being. It is better to say that it is a magic prop with growth potential. If it is replaced by a growing ring that can release various magics, it feels that it has little impact on the plot. Aria, I spent a lot of pen and ink on writing, but the effect is not good. Apart from the imposed destiny of revenge, it is even difficult to see what kind of character and hobbies she has. It is difficult to remember like NPC. To put it bluntly, it is not even as good as Ferlandon. To sum up, I personally think that the best-written section is the subplot of Arroyo Ramon. The violent conflicts and strong personality collisions make it vivid at once.

It's rare to see a lawful good protagonist (

After watching a little bit, I found that I couldn't stand it. There are so many bullshit in one auction, I want to persuade you to quit.

There are big books that cost 20 yuan each. I went there and there were them too.

To be honest, I don't really like that the protagonist is from the lawful good camp. There are too many constraints. Most people from the good camp have too many constraints, and people from the lawful camp will inevitably be a bit pedantic. Personally, I feel that absolute neutrality is more to my taste. Forget about chaos. Since ancient times, chaos has caused confusion.

What a pity, why is it a eunuch?

As in the title...223

Reminds me of Diablo 3 Oh! That enemy looks worth fighting.

Post it here today!!!

Today is the last comment, I will change the book review area tomorrow

Well, pumpkin🎃, is it really okay for you to use the beginning of Shoujo Scroll 5 Skyrim as a starting point?

Apart from corpses, won't you loot occupied locations?

I discovered this book so long ago. , Now after the harmonious storm has swept away, there is still only so much cushion? ? ?

For example, the names of the equipment dropped when you start killing spiders are all missing.

In Chapter 14, "Ten gold coins are equivalent to one hundred silver coins, and one hundred silver coins are equivalent to one hundred copper coins."…How come copper coins are worth the same as silver coins…

After reading the first chapter, it feels so familiar. The Elder Scrolls is a visual sense 😁

Hail to the great Moszedonrik, Lord of Dead Magic! ! ! ! Go and believe in the great Mosedonrik, and fight in heaven and on earth! !

I skipped a few chapters to test the waters and started reading from the beginning if it felt good. However, when I reached the fourth chapter, I became extremely angry! ! ! You damn thing look down on kobolds! ! !

The result is that up to now, there have been many accidents while doing tasks.

Brothers, the author has released a new book!

In short, many chapters in this book are filled with Akarin for some reason... By the way, I haven't written any stomach-warming plot that exceeds the standard of holding hands, right? (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻ Ah, also, the reply function in the book review area is too arrogant for some reason. I have read all the comments you made, but I can't reply for a while. I'm sorry... (Poi, come here, I promise not to beep you)

It seems like they don't want any reward, but an adventure group is just like a living Lei Feng who wants to help? The protagonist actually agreed to it as a matter of course, agreeing to be voluntary labor without any discussion about the salary or the way to distribute the spoils. Isn't this plot too ridiculous? Or am I missing something?

😚 After reading the novel for so long, I finally saw a righteous male protagonist. He is much better than most of the pseudo-righteous male protagonists nowadays. When will the protagonist get his own mount and a holy avenger?

Liquid water was discovered on Mars, water, water, water, water. . . . .

As mentioned, you can use your imagination appropriately, but the final appearance of the character may be slightly adjusted according to the needs of the plot. The format of the role is as follows: (Example on the 2nd floor) ------------------ [Required field] Name: (Chinese names should not appear as much as possible. You know the story with a western fantasy background) Race (Gender): (Can you fill in?, But please indicate it and don't be too outrageous) Camp tendencies: Personality: Identity: Specialties: Character introduction: (Like self-introduction?) [Optional] Basic occupation: (No need to indicate the level, it is inconvenient to express when writing) Adventure Career: (same as above) Affiliated forces: How you want to appear: Dramas you hope to participate in: Other remarks: (Some things I would like to add) ------------------ PS: Please give us a break for Long Aotian, our writing skills can't handle the combination of Chinese and Western settings_(:зゝ∠)_ In addition, the map will be uploaded to [Related Works] shortly for your reference. I really hope that the character is not too strong, for fear of being written down... One more thing: Don't be too strong. The stronger you are, the harder it will be to appear on stage.