Sword and Spirit World

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First of all, due to limited time, I didn't read many chapters, but the few chapters I read were very good. Moreover, as a new author, being able to write such a beginning is considered extremely talented. This novel, according to the introduction, is about modern people traveling through time, and then Goldfinger began to rise. Starting from the first scene, the facts of time travel are directly given, without the old-fashioned "I'm not dead!" "Where is this?" "Accept the memory" and the like. I think this is a good thing, because today's readers are basically familiar with the time-travel convention, even disgusting. Written this way, not only can the plot progress quickly, but it also avoids clichés. Next, after giving the general status quo, the plot progress will start immediately, and the fat man will come, and the purpose is to start the test. Then the importance of testing is explained, and at the end of the first chapter, it's time to set out to test. This chapter ends at a good or bad time. Fortunately, this chapter has a consistent rhythm, neither rapid nor gentle. It's a bad thing. Many people probably clicked X when they saw this. Because the expectation for the follow-up is not strong. "New authors basically lose here" This has something to do with the setting, because the "power" of the protagonist was not given at the beginning, so the protagonist was still useless, so he went to test it. Although he knew that he would win later, the sense of expectation was not strong. If the cheat code is very powerful at the beginning, and then you take the test, you will have a strong sense of expectation, but this goes against the author's writing style, so this is a setting problem. Then, when we came to the test site, the classmates mocked "suppression", the instructor lectured, and then it started. A series of tests followed, and finally the protagonist won, which was the first climax. However, this climax is not very wet, it can actually be more wet! ! ! For example, if the setting is changed, what if the classmates ridicule the protagonist and the instructor does not lecture him, but instead worries about the protagonist and hopes that the protagonist will quit? This is a matter of setting. There are many reasons why it is not very trendy, such as from the perspective of writing style. Generally, when the climax is in progress, it is the progress, not the foreshadowing. At this time, the tone should be urgent, the explanation should be less, and it should be concise. The sentences should be short, there should be many sentence fragments, and some words such as "" and "" should be removed. This is better. Depend on! He was talking a lot of nonsense and didn't even know what he was talking about. . . In conclusion, this is a good novel, not to mention the plot, it is worth reading! Hope to update soon, come on!