The Mysterious Kingdom

I look down on Xia Qi, especially in the girls' school and Leng Yue. I look down on her.

After reading two chapters, there are so many fucks everywhere and the language is so crude that I really can't stand it anymore!

You have to rely on your own efforts and a little bit of luck to survive until the end.

All in all, author brother, your writing style has always limited your imagination. I have to say that this is a very embarrassing thing. I have read several books you have written and compared them. It is obvious that you are a person with particularly strong imagination and conception ability. The paintings are also unique, but they are still limited by the writing style. Otherwise, I believe you would be a great master now. Therefore, the only suggestion I can give you is to read more classical Chinese, poetry and other connotative literary works, including Lu Xun's works. If you have more time, you can also read foreign works, which will enrich your imagination and writing style. Finally, I wish your writing path will become increasingly broad and lead to the road to godhood soon!

Pigfoot is an ordinary person. What is the personality of an ordinary person? Is he a cold-blooded killer? Or a calm and sinister man? Or a wise man with an ordinary heart? Don't you just like to read counterattacks when reading novels? Ordinary people grow up little by little and counterattack little by little, isn't it very suitable for the mentality of us ordinary people... The author actually set that ordinary people should look like ordinary people, not a killer, not a scheming man, nor a wise man. The scene is so scary, it's not too much to relieve the pressure with broken mouth, it will gradually get better. In the early days of Sword of Sword 1, Xiaoyao was also a ruffian. Didn't he gain a lot of fans? In the early days of Naruto, Naruto was still a lousy troublemaker! The author assumes that ordinary people should be ordinary people, not ordinary people with cold-blooded mentality, calm mind and indifferent attitude. This is called gods not calling people, Colonel Chu

I was halfway through the third volume. Let me tell you the reason why I gave up the book. The main reason is that the protagonist is really not good. I feel that no one is better than him as the protagonist except the fat guy in the girls' dormitory. The protagonist feels cheap to everyone, and then he is cheaper than everyone else. (After the female dormitory ended and officially joined the job, I saw two people and forcibly thought that they were cheap. Then in the third volume I have been cheating on my teammates since the beginning); I usually don't perform as well as ordinary people. At critical moments, I rely on the protagonist's halo to suddenly have an idea to break the situation; and I vaguely remember that the protagonist didn't believe in ghosts at first, and he didn't believe it until he saw it. Then when he met others, he would say that there are ghosts without any evidence. If others didn't believe it, they would think that others were idiots or sb.

Why do so many people criticize this novel? I like this novel the most. I have read it no less than three times. This is the one I have recommended to others the most. After reading it again, I still feel like I want to read it a fourth time.

To avoid a surprise, let me tell you a storyline. You are deciding whether to read it There is a passage in the book about the protagonist encountering an enemy during the execution of an incident, but he was not killed but ran away. At that time, other people in the team reminded the protagonist that these people can find you, so be careful recently. According to normal people's logic, the first thing to do when returning home at this time is to tell other people to pay attention and stop wandering around. Then I am thinking of ways to either solve it for the enemy or to find a way to reconcile with the other party. As a result, our protagonist seemed to have forgotten what happened after he returned home. He didn't tell anyone, and continued to earn honor points the next day, flirting with the supporting actress in the book. When he returned home, he found that his enemies had ambushed him in front of his house and kidnapped everyone who lived with him. I didn't read it later, but deleting a third of this book didn't affect my reading. I still cried at the end of the chapter every day and complained that I was not recognized for my talent. This kind of person can't even remember the settings he wrote, writes suspense articles without thinking, and is in front of the computer every day typing and answering... You can add the rest.

I just read this book, and now I have seen the end of the first incident after becoming a regular character. The plot of the book is okay, but there is no highlight, that is, it is readable, but the character of the protagonist is quite bad. It feels like the author wants to create a funny guy with some intelligence, but I don't know Is the author's writing style a bit weak, or the author's understanding of the word funny is biased. After one chapter, there are no other words other than calling his teammates bitches. After I became a full-time employee, I inexplicably disliked each other when I arrived at the apartment. I don't know how the conflict came about. As a newbie, Shouldn't people humbly ask for advice when meeting seniors? After all, people will die. In order to survive, you have to swallow your anger first, and others have not done anything to you. And then towards Leng Yue, the main character gave me the feeling of being overflowing with jealousy and calling others cheap. Man, although it is said that the protagonist of the novice tutorial saved Leng Yue's life in the end, the book would have ended without Leng Yue in the beginning. So at present, it seems that this protagonist gives me a sense of deja vu that if he appeared in front of me, I would really want to beat him to death, which is very unlikable.

The male protagonist asked Leng Yue why he came to do this job. Leng Yue didn't tell him the reason. For such a thing, the male protagonist would just scold Bichi directly? ? Do you still think Leng Yue has some charming attributes? ? I… Was deceived... Can anyone tell me which chapter the male protagonist's character started to change?