Big Demon Psychic

You can also write in more detail, such as how many bowls of rice you eat every day, how many grains of rice are in each bowl of rice, and what is the length of each grain of rice 🤫🤫

90% Of the characters are female, no men

Author, you are too good at word count, too boring, the expressions and tone of the characters are not well described, and the psychological activities are stagnant. Even fake golden elixirs can't kill the protagonist, and even the masters of the golden elixir stage can't kill the protagonist by clearing the battlefield. A foundation-building monk can beat the protagonist into a dog. The sinister villain who stabbed him earlier turned into a good teammate in an instant and even saved him several times! Together, three people can kill monsters by leapfrogging two levels! These can be ignored, but what you wrote is really boring!

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If you salute, just salute, if you have to add a monk's salute

To be honest, I was forced to quit in the first two chapters and I couldn't bear it. . .

Could the protagonist be a fool? In Chapter 39, I don't see the need to save the giant ape, not to mention the plot that almost kills the protagonist... Is this plot intended to describe the existence of true love between humans and beasts?

This makes it uncomfortable to read. After all, a novel is not a prose, so don't leave "blank space" at every turn. In addition, I feel that the author may really like to write prose. When writing novels, he sometimes likes to force prose techniques into novels to create a special atmosphere, which is very inconsistent. Also, sometimes the words are far-fetched and appear artificial, such as "The young man raised a hand and silently brushed the crystal from the corner of his eyes"; sometimes it can be seen that Internet writers often make mistakes, such as forcing small movements, such as "raising an eyebrow" inexplicably.

I've just read chapter seven, but I'm already committed. The author writes very delicately and writes with great care.

This is a good book, you need to calm down and read it slowly

It's so holy, I don't feel anything at all

This book is okay, but not many people read it.

Cute, update soon. Sit back and wait.

This is the first online article I read. It was he who brought me into the online literature circle. I was only in elementary school at that time and now I am going to college. I found it on Baidu bookshelf and read pirated books. Now I come back full of feelings No matter what, he is my youth.