The Lich King

The human perspective of the protagonist is very good, full of emotions and real. Although becoming an undead is very novel and interesting, for real humans, it is still too cruel, unbearable loneliness and indifferent emotions, and it is too easy to make people collapse or distort. (If it doesn't crash, it naturally lacks authenticity and sense of immersion. If you know a game - Planescape: Torment) Because the plot of the protagonist as a human was very good, I couldn't accept that the protagonist became an undead, and then only fought and was discriminated against by the living every day. (For some people who take it for granted that turning the undead is just a physical transformation, it is really inappropriate. Look at those Forgotten ones. They are not forced to act like madmen. Look at the Queen of the Forgotten ones. If it were not for loneliness and hatred, she would not be twisted like that.) Transforming into the undead, being hated by the living, not being integrated into the group of the living, and deprived of the entertainment and experience of the living. I don't believe that a modern person can withstand the crushing of all kinds of external forces. For the protagonist, he doesn't even know whether he can live or not, and he is not afraid of the undead body. This shows that he is a bit naive and just plays reality as a game! Ask yourself, if you had the ability to become an undead immortal, would you live a short but happy life? Or do you want to be a half-dead undead who is discriminated against and ostracized by the living and has no fun? What is eternal life for? It is for better enjoyment, but what enjoyment do undead and lich have? Unless you are a pervert, you only like to get spiritual pleasure from a pile of dead bodies and skeletons! The author of this book has very strong writing skills, but unfortunately the character positioning is not good, so in the future it can only be reduced to an ordinary monster-killing and upgrading game.

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Come on, author, you must not be a eunuch, you bastard! ! ! I hope the author will write more and make more appointments! ! ! Ten chapters a day, it seems completely fine 😁

In addition, this body is not original anyway, so the protagonist can consider researching how to change his body.

The handmade leather bag in Chapter 23 is said to have four grids that add up to 1 square meter, but each grid is only 250 square centimeters 😰. The side length of 1 square meter is 100 centimeters. 100X100 is equal to ***** square centimeters, okay?

Writing a book is not easy. So many people who write want to get ahead. If they don't work harder, how can they succeed? Of course, I will only talk about it to give you some encouragement. Just write well and you will be successful one day. Don't give up on yourself and lower your standards. Better to write better every day.

I have never registered a book before. This is the first time I have to be careful. It seems that many authors have this problem: there are too many useless words. For example, in the second chapter, "It completely suppressed Andre and dozens of others." Wouldn't it be better to remove the "all" and "give"? Every time I see too many words like "disgusting" used in assignments, I feel that there is no need to add them. Just to make up the word count? There are also "but", "eventually" and so on. I have listed them one by one. I sincerely offer some small suggestions (please don't criticize me).

It's easy to take away the book of dark rituals, but the protagonist is disguised as a deceiver orb and hides for a month. He is discovered as soon as he leaves the town. Why didn't the author say that it was the result of divination by a wizard? The protagonist goes all the way to the forest and crosses the river. They were actually caught up. The feeling of giving away someone's life thousands of miles away is so sincere that I almost cry. To avoid being hunted, the protagonist relies on his racial talent to go into the river or the sea, hide from him for a year and a half, and then use the fishman to level up. After he came out, whoever was able to kill him as a level 10 warrior still cast a net on the beach to search the entire coastline and hunted him down for a year and a half. Make good use of your racial talents and become an aquatic creature in the water.

Either he is born a demi-god, or he is an idol with no entity, and there is no one who becomes a god in the future.

In the past, the author's books were like fried rice without salt, full of ingredients but no flavor. The plot is good, but the characterization is pale. Watching it is like reading a narrative😵. I hope the author can describe more about the psychological activities and personality characteristics of the characters, and give each character spirituality, so as not to make people feel that every character in the author's works is just A, B, C and D, without any deep impression.