The Lich King

The protagonist's human perspective in the beginning is well-written, with rich and realistic emotions. Becoming an undead, while novel and interesting, is still too cruel for real humans. The unbearable loneliness and emotional detachment are too easily enough to drive a person to collapse or become twisted. (Without collapse, there's a lack of realism and immersion.

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Keep it up, author! Don't abandon this project, you bastard!!! I hope you write more and more frequently!!! Ten chapters a day? That should be no problem for me! 😁

In addition, since this body isn't original anyway, the protagonist could consider researching how to get a different body.

The handmade leather bag in Chapter 23 is said to have four compartments totaling 1 square meter, but each compartment is only 250 square centimeters 😰. The author's side length for 1 square meter is 100 centimeters, so 100 x 100 equals ***** square centimeters, okay?

Writing a book is not easy. So many people write books, and if they don't work harder, how can they possibly succeed? Of course, all I can say is that I'm trying to cheer you on and give you some encouragement. Keep writing, and you'll succeed one day. Don't give up or lower your standards. Ideally, you should write better every day.

I've never registered an account before when reading books, this is the first time I'm offering a slightly better suggestion. It seems many authors have this problem: too much unnecessary language. For example, in Chapter 2, "completely suppressed Andrei and dozens of others." Wouldn't it be better to remove "" and ""? I always feel disgusted when I see authors using too many of these words.

Taking the book of the Dark Ritual is one thing, but the protagonist used the Orb of Deception to disguise himself and hid for a month, only to be discovered as soon as he tried to leave town. Why didn't the author mention that it was the result of a wizard's divination? The protagonist travels through the forest and crosses the river, only to be caught by everyone.

They are either born demigods or idols without a physical form; none of them became gods later in life.

The author's previous books were like fried rice without salt—full of ingredients but bland. The plot was good, but the character development was weak. Reading them felt like reading a narrative 😵. I hope the author will describe the characters' inner thoughts and personality traits more, giving each character a soul, so that the readers don't feel that every character in the author's writing is just an ordinary person with no lasting impression.