Naruto Legend: My Sharingan

Please read the original work before writing a fanfic. Well, that's it, never see you again.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author: it is best not to use the first person when writing online novels. This makes it difficult for readers to get involved.

The author made up a lot of settings by himself and deviated from the original work. What attributes of ninjutsu can't hurt psychic beasts? Then those who play with bugs are invincible, and those with dogs are invincible, because they are considered a type of psychic beasts. Also, the first Hokage can use sage mode. The only ones who don't use senjutsu in sage mode are the curse seals of Goju and Orochimaru. Let's read the original work first before writing a fanfic.

When writing a Naruto fanfic, at least the author should read the original Naruto novel first, right?

The protagonist is like a fool🔪🔪🔪

He is really a good person. This is the first time I heard that someone actually wants to be someone like Uzumaki Naruto. Do you want to own his experience, his pain, his feelings, his despair, and his hatred? What you see is nothing but beauty. In the dark place, it is all pain. Being treated like this, disgusted and hated by such villagers, living in despair and pain since childhood, the kind of person who has nothing and is hated by everyone, who hates the beautiful and beautiful grandma, who is pushed around everywhere, you are really amazing, I wish you to become a great hero like him in your next life, I hope you can maintain yourself

Damn it, have you reached the starting point of your YY diary?

What is it written? It's a mess.

It's so confusing to watch, the main character is a year younger than Itachi Uchiha. But the setting here is that Uchiha Itachi is much smaller than the fourth generation, and also smaller than Kakashi. What time period is this? Anyone who has watched Naruto should know that Itachi is roughly a bit older than Kakashi. After all, after the fourth generation took office, Itachi was able to kill the entire clan. Kakashi is just a little guy with outstanding abilities. Then there is the first person version of all evil, which makes my scalp tingle when I see it! Extremely poisonous! ! ! !

Another author whose cousins ​​can't be distinguished

Shennong: Chapter 1: Running away, first person.

That mysterious organization can't be Yangcun in Qingqing Prairie, right?

What era is it in? Still in the first person?

The plot feels good, but it seems to be in the first person and the writing style is so uncomfortable. Farewell.

The names of the characters are all wrong. Itachi's father is called Fugaku instead of Tomigaoka.