Marvel's Merchant of Death

I'm commenting more objectively. As an old bookworm, I can barely understand it. It's quite frustrating because the taste of this book is very suitable for me, but it is inexplicably messy. There are various settings of the protagonist that appear for no reason. You still can't understand it. You can barely understand it by relying on your own understanding and other types of books. I guess newcomers really can't understand it. It felt like a continuation of a certain story, but after searching for it, I found it. I read the previous book in chronological order and found that it was true. However, the outline of the previous book was also extremely confusing. However, because it is the first book and there are no other settings, newcomers can still understand it. However, those who have not read the previous books really can't stand it. If you really like it, I advise you to search for the author's name and find his first book. If you read it from the first one, you will be more able to accept and understand it. As for me, who started this book directly, I really couldn't stand it after reading half the book. Because I don't understand the settings inside at all. I also really like this kind of technology flow. It's really itchy, but it feels so untouchable. It's so uncomfortable 😭

As title Knowledge is never forgotten If it is the ability in the inherited arms madman's book Then the protagonist's knowledge of laws and science should not be forgotten. In the Marvel world, many technological instruments can realize the protagonist's science and technology. Nanobug robots can be made in Marvel The protagonist can completely transform the moon into his own war fortress The cosmic knight technology that combines nanotechnology and biotechnology can also be realized, which is much more reliable than Iron Man.

The introduction itself has problems. Marvel does not have Umbrella. Even if it is a multiverse, don't use the word Marvel.

It feels so confusing, and the narrative is like a running account with no ups and downs. The supporting characters are hit by the halo of the protagonist and collectively are mentally retarded. For example, in the mechanical public enemy plane, the protagonist pretends to be an alien and provides body-strengthening viruses. Before even saying a few words, President Xiao Hei is extremely happy. I'm speechless. Aliens suddenly appear and provide you with viruses. Do you dare to use them even if they can strengthen them? Do you know what's lurking in it? It would be more logical to provide some basic body-strengthening techniques or grab them directly. There is also a clone of the protagonist, which in some respects is an independent thinking body. Independent thinking means that he has his own logical thinking and learning abilities. The author emphasizes that because these clones have the same goal as the protagonist, they will not betray or have other ideas. This is simply nonsense. Even if the goal is the same, there are many ways to achieve it. Are there many examples of estrangement and even contradictions caused by different paths chosen? . Therefore, on a fundamental level, the ontology must have absolute suppression and control over the separate body.

This book is very well written. But the pace is a bit fast

A void empire whose ruling scope is limited to the earth is simply a joke empire

The first chapter directly persuades you to quit. Not only does the author's writing style not reach the level of a good book, but he is too lazy to even add punctuation? Typesetting is also very particular, and it's not just about adding punctuation.

The author said that he wrote the random chapters to prevent piracy [that's what he said before]. I guess your anti-piracy approach is not that different. Is there any connection between your anti-piracy approach and the way you write it? ? ?

There are too many typos, too many wrong sentences, and the plot is very confusing. Seriously, the author, please read it yourself before posting it.

It's 2202 years ago and I can still read novels that don't have a single sentence that's full of grammatical errors.

There are a lot of typos and incorrect sentences, but if you don't take these into account, it's still pretty good.

When I first started reading, I always felt like this book was written after the previous one. Is there a "previous book"? Got a 404? If so, what is the title of the book? Thanks.

The very crucial first chapter is just like mud. Firstly, the background of the story is explained clearly. It is not much better than it is now. The result of being unconventional is that the first chapter is withdrawn.

It feels like they are all of the same type. The movie world can't stand it anymore and has been withdrawn.

Umbrella Corporation and Marvel can be written together, but the problem is that the author's writing skills and imagination must be strong. Otherwise, the plot will be as confusing and inexplicable as this one. Coupled with the randomness (it does not explain how to travel through the planes, and there are no restrictions on thousands and hundreds of people's fleets to travel) the planes will cause the plot to collapse even more. After a few chapters, it will become unreadable. The mixed writing of Marvel + Resident Evil requires a lot of original plots, otherwise it will not be able to be written.

If you play viruses in Marvel, you will die miserably...

No sense of immersion! Also, the protagonist's name is weird, or the author made a common mistake. The United States is racially discriminatory, and the Chinese cannot succeed.

You always divide your writing here and there. You just write the plot directly. There is no introduction of the protagonist at all.

So boring, I almost fell asleep watching it

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