The Sage of Yidao

This is a good book with a novel idea. It starts with gambling, which is a very creative method. This is similar to "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism" which starts with articles, which shows that the author has quite the essence of online writing. However, although the number of people with good ideas is unknown, the subsequent storytelling method is not something that ordinary people can do. The author enters the plot very quickly, without any sloppiness, no long time travel process, no background settings... But slowly unfolds step by step, making people gradually become addicted to it. There are millions of novels out there these days, and if you want to fight your way through this, you have to make the opening chapter engaging! The author has also done a remarkable job in this regard. In terms of plot, the author does not ramble like a novice at all, but relaxes and regulates the rhythm very well... The so-called relaxation is the foundation of the novel. As for the writing style, it is obvious to all, it is very literary, and it is not a problem for online articles, it is more than enough. Finally, the paragraphs below are mostly short sentences, making it easy for readers to read whether they are on a computer or a mobile phone. It can be seen that the author has grasped these small details very well. Next, let's talk about some of my own suggestions. This is a fantasy novel about gambling, so the author must have a complete upgrade system that can support millions of words, which is not easy. Because it is necessary to create a completely new system and there is nothing to learn from, this tests the author's skill. From the beginning, the author has done quite well, but you must take a long-term view. No matter what happens in the future, at least your goal is to reach a length of more than one million words, so as not to be unable to continue writing in the later stage. The fun part of fantasy is to step on people and slap them in the face. This requires mastering the rhythm. The author's previous writing is quite reasonable, but the progress is a bit too fast. Sometimes you have to suppress it a little, and then suddenly explode, then it is hearty and extremely happy! There are also punctuation marks used by the author, which are not very standardized in some places. A period is used in one sentence, followed by a period or two in another sentence. This is probably caused by the author's excessive speed. It's harmless at the moment, but if the book becomes popular in the future, it's inevitable that some will find fault with it and look for trouble. Finally, I would like to conclude that this book has a novel concept, sophisticated writing, compact story, and stable updates. It will be popular in the future! I hope the author can maintain the pace of two updates per day. We are in the initial stage now and there is no need to update it so fast. Save some articles for emergencies, or use them to attract votes when the popularity is high. It will explode after it is put on the shelves, or it will be more effective when the website recommends it. Now we just need to keep updating steadily and gradually gain popularity. For an online article with several million words, we are not seizing the day, but the future. Finally, I want to say that because the author's writing style is relatively sophisticated, most people who like this book will be experienced bookworms. It is unlikely that it will become popular in the short term, but once they like this book, they will be steadfast. I hope the author will be mentally prepared and not be too impatient and affect himself. In this case, you can refer to "The Immortal Rebellion" and "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"... But Mao Ni is also included in this list. The test is often after the middle period. Progress will lead to becoming a god, and retreat will lead to depression. The author writes and cherishes it. Today, the small account had 2 votes and could only cast 1 vote. Later, I found an old Qidian account and cast 4 additional votes. I also logged into the large account in Chuangshi and found that I couldn't find your book and couldn't vote. It was very sad!