Immortal Martial Arts Doctor

Ouch! I watched the mountain go into the ditch. This is not to say that the author is in trouble, but that the plot of this book is really ups and downs~

I really hope that there will be exciting things in the novel, whether it is emotional disputes or entanglements at all levels. I hope you, the author, will be optimistic!

This is indeed a rare good book, especially in terms of writing, which can be said to be first-rate among modern fantasy novels. It will not be a problem to make it a classic if it continues like this, but the plot development is a bit immature. If the author can slightly strengthen the control of the rhythm and highlight the character creation, I believe more people will like it.

Praise! I will continue to follow, there is nothing to say about the recommendation vote.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the development of the plot is a little slow in the past, but this is not a big problem. A good story is really good. Even if there are a few typos, it doesn't matter. So, the author, just don't let the plot stall.

The text control is very good, and it would be better to strengthen the psychological description of the characters. There are some imperfections in the writing style, but the plot is attractive and the characters have their own characteristics. It can be seen from this that the author has carefully laid out the direction of the book before writing. It is a masterpiece that enriches the soul. It is worth reading, tasting, and thinking deeply. It is indeed good. I appreciate and look forward to it!!!!! Brother, I support you!

The large brush strokes are concise and clean, and look comfortable and smooth. It often only takes a few strokes to outline a realistic picture like ink.

Enthusiasm is slowly worn away, so if you see things like unsatisfactory results in the novel, you, the author, have to persevere. Everything is difficult at the beginning, hard in the middle, and even harder at the end. Persistence is the last word.