Explosive Martial God

I have long wanted to write a long review for you, but before writing, I have to read the previous works first, and then compare the later ones. Okay, without further ado, I just read the first chapter, Hero, and then Chapter 57, Past and Present Life, and found a few problems. First, the title is confusing. In fact, most people have this problem. It seems to be a minor problem, but it is actually a problem that affects the readers' sense of reading. For example, he thought. . . Why is he like this? It's confusing, who is the protagonist? I can't find the main character, are you still watching? Second, I don't know whether you read martial arts or not. People read novels and don't like them. I also had this problem in the early stages. Either there was a fight or a climax in every chapter. It was all the contradictions condensed together and triggered at once. . Maybe one or two chapters, maybe three or four. Third, connection, this is actually related to the second question, this chapter is very lively. . It's over, not thinking about it. . What happened to so and so? The strong desire to read comes from. . Suspense. Since the conflict is not strong, the sense of suspense is very weak. Fourth, don't describe details. Many times, except for necessary things and missing text, don't ask for anything else. It's a bit slow to read. . When I say this, it may be a little difficult for you to understand. Chapter fifty-seven has a plot in it. Lian Chi carried Lian Jia to the stone monument, took a blanket, lit a torch and gave it to the man. . . Your writing, both in terms of psychological description and verbal actions, is far superior to others. When I read the first chapter, Hero, I even felt a little pity for the robot. . The works you write can affect people's emotions after reading them, which is the prelude to success. I am also a newcomer. Having said this, you can keep what is useful and treat anything that is wrong as... Well. Lian Chi drew his sword, but saw... The light of the sword flashed... ,

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Time flies so fast. It has been several years since I read novels. In the past few years, I have read more and more novels, and maybe I have not read many of them. This book is very well written. I like the relationship between Pig's Foot and his father. It is very sad. The author has described it very well. I hope the author can continue to do so. Come on. Also, I feel that there are too few descriptions of the Chinese martial arts of Pig's Foot, such as inch strength and so on, which are not written at all in the fight. Our earth still has various martial arts and understandings of Tao, which can also be written out and used in practice. Pig's Foot, as a robot, can remember all kinds of information on the earth. These are golden fingers, and they can also be written. In short, as big as your imagination is, Pig's Foot will be more awesome.

"Bakuro Martial God" is a new book, and I am also a newbie. If you find this book interesting, please support me, thank you!

A move may not lead to bloodshed. . . Bones are broken, tendons are broken, and the pain is excruciating. [Fn=2_3]In this battle, Lian Chi fought hard. . [Fn=4_1][fn=4_1][fn=4_1]

The number is 328.712.032. If you like this book... Well, I don't dare to expect to like it... If you think this book is okay... Well, if you are bored, you are welcome to come in and play, well, that's it.