The Infinite Earth Roars

Generally speaking, it's okay. Some passages are quite gripping, except for some repetitions in some places. But there are no novels with more than a million words that are not good, and this is considered less good. The part where you take your sister to the dungeon is so embarrassing, and you actually signed an agreement with the insect controller to reduce his attributes, so you can guarantee that you will be able to keep him. From the beginning to the end, you don't realize that the protagonist is such a brainless idiot. He is just not good at some things, but he is not the kind of person who is completely illogical.

There is no need to talk about skills, you can get them by taking skill books anyway. The pig's feet will develop their own bloodline abilities. There are two types of powers, the earth and the magnetic field. As for the development of these two, first of all, in a more scientific direction, it directly develops towards the four major forces, namely universal gravitation and electromagnetic force. Of course, there are also more magical ones. The simple one is that the earth contains countless minerals, which can develop into the metal system, which can be defended and attacked, and the hardness is high enough. Also, the land becomes desertified and the desert absorbs water. The other one is magnetism, magnetic field, electromagnetic gun, change it again, and directly control lightning. And going deeper, what does the earth have, life and death, mother earth and the like are not life. Burials and other things are not always in the ground. Don't all the underworlds and underworlds always go to the ground? Isn't this a typical death? This is approximate, the real land is very vast. Those continental worlds, or those various planets, are not the earth.

It feels pretty good😁

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I was immediately confused when I saw that parameter and couldn't read on.

The plot, world selection, and IQ are okay, but the author's description skills still have a lot of room for improvement.

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The writing is still good. It's a pity that there is no follow-up. I haven't seen the author publish a book yet.

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It's too watery. Training skills and upgrading skills can only water a few chapters. It's completely unnecessary.

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Did someone change the writing later? ? ? What kind of writing pens, two worlds in front and behind?

How unwilling! The protagonist will be gone even before reaching the heavenly level.

In the book, I mentioned that superpowers are the biggest gain in his world. I have been writing about skills in the rest of the book because skills and superpowers can complement each other, and their combined release is stronger. I did not explain this point dryly. I was going to talk about it when dealing with the BOSS. Superpowers are the basis for his foothold. This will not change.

Most of the abilities of the ground system can be understood by oneself, and they are all universal. What really makes the protagonist powerful is his wisdom (flexible thinking, adaptability, and research ability). Try to get rid of the "ready-made" power from the main god as much as possible. Escape and assist in combat: Of course, it is earth escape. During combat, you can attack mysteriously. When in danger, you can burrow into the ground and run away. However, you must explain and set up how to solve the problem of underground breathing. In terms of attack: it can be diversified, and the energy can be manipulated into a stone cage, into a stone thorn, or like the queen in Frozen, she can create stone steps to fly into the sky. The energy of mutants is basic energy and has various plasticity. Defense: Manipulating soil into armor and the like, making it invulnerable. In addition, there is one thing that the author can adopt, which is the medium when using energy. For example, if the protagonist is not manipulating ordinary soil, he uses black technology to fuse the unlimited "breathing soil" with the lava deep in the planet, and manipulates the terrifyingly high-temperature lava that can melt everything. His combat power suddenly explodes? (It can also be used in some special scenes, such as setting the protagonist to encounter a powerful opponent, but his clever layout, or temporarily using the special characteristics of the nearby earth environment, to complete a wonderful counterattack.)

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Regarding the setting, I lay down the foreshadowing first, and then explain it in detail when I use it later. Therefore, if you saw that the explanation was not clear before, don't be too anxious. When you use it later, I will explain it in detail.

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