Tongtian Shengjing

🤭First of all, I think this should be the author's first book. Regardless of whether it is the author's first vest or not, as a "newcomer", it is already good to be able to write like this. From the first ten chapters, I saw something different from ordinary online fantasy novels. I don't know if it's a matter of personal thought or if it's true. I'll write it down now and see if other book friends feel the same way: 1. I have been reading online novels for four or five years, and I have also tried to write them in a feverish way, but I really feel that only some authors with divine personality dare to use wedges as the first chapter. After all, wedges generally have fewer protagonists and a lot of foreshadowing, which places certain requirements on the author's writing style and writing strength. But although I don't think the chapter in "Tongtian Shengjing" is very brilliant, it did arouse my interest in reading it. 2. Let's talk about writing style. This is what I have seen, and what is different from most online writers is that Nanshan Xunhe dares not to be vulgar, not to abandon his writing style, and not to cater to novices. This seems to me to be very courageous. I give a thumbs up here! 3. Let's talk about the plot. There is no doubt that the author brought us into a palace battle, or a conspiracy. This kind of scene is difficult to write, but it is also very exciting when it is written. There are no major problems in the first ten chapters. I wish the author can hold on to it~ 4. Emotion. I can't remember the first five or six chapters clearly. What impressed me the most was the male protagonist's feelings for Princess Qingcheng. He withheld it for three years, killed Liu Sanfeng for love, and revealed the emperor's throne. In the final analysis, this incident was still caused by emotions! "The blood of the fifteenth year is all over the city, and the beautiful girl smiles like a flower", the emotion is so deep, do you have any stories about the author?[Fn=2_4] Of course, the above are just personal opinions. Book friends are welcome to criticize and argue if you are not convinced! One final word! ! Just say one thing! ! Author! ! Do you dare to update more every day? ! ! 😃😃

"Laughing at the End of the World" is a relaxing and adventurous fantasy, the show has integrity, and the waves have connotation. You won't know it until you watch it, and you will still want it after watching it. As the saying goes: How can a person survive in this world without getting stabbed? Smile away all grudges, smile again and you will be far away! It has been fattened, please collect it!

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As the title says, the plot drags on... Too long! ! !

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Well written, I saved it last time. It's been a long time since I've been online. I haven't read the articles I've posted. I'm also afraid of the pressure. Sheng Huan's first book was very stressful. Thank you to sister Qianqian and brother for their support. Sheng Huan can write articles with peace of mind. In addition, Sheng Huan's health has not been good recently. Brother, you should also take care of yourself and support me! 🤝[fn=2_9]

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