Maoshan Arts: The Ghost-Hunting Expert

I'd like to tell you, author, that you should do your research before writing about history. Young people these days don't know much about history, and you're just writing nonsense! How could Qin Shi Huang's clothes be yellow? Black was the dominant color in the Qin and Han dynasties; yellow only became popular among the imperial family starting in the Tang dynasty! And isn't "Jingnan" in the article referring to Nanjing? Zhu Di's tomb is in Beijing; Zhu Yuanzhang's is in Nanjing!

Chapter 3: I believe my grandfather wouldn't harm me. Wasn't he bitten by his grandfather? Where does his confidence come from? Chapter Four: It was too late for Sanshui to retreat. Is it really enough time to just recite such a long incantation? Okay, I don't want to watch anymore.

This book really gets better around the middle; it's not overly sentimental or toxic.

I really like this book, giving it a thumbs up!

This book is great, why is the activity level so low? I think it's excellent, keep it up!

The main character is too weak; he always narrowly escapes death, and his tactics are always the same—he always has to fight bigger monsters at the exact same level.

This novel looks good, but there are too many typos!

Hello author, I apologize for bothering you, but my work is really poor. Could you please offer some feedback on my novel, "The Spirit of the Swordsman"?