A Distant Heart in the Martial World

The text description is quite good, but the storyline is inexplicable... I will say a few points: 1. Yan Ge inexplicably asked him to win a game with all his strength, and his pubic area was so tight, just to see if the protagonist could do anything for her? It felt inexplicable... 2. The encounter with Yun Qiuxin, this girl appeared very suddenly, and for no reason other people couldn't bear to insult her, and the treasure hunt in the cave was also very sudden, and suddenly there were tears from the stars, just one drop for each person, which was just the right time for people to share their memories, and I specially opened the golden finger for the girl... 3. Drink fairy tea. One second before, I decided not to go and told people not to bend to my will. Then the next second, a girl appeared and asked me to have tea at Six Doors, and then happily went? Are you succumbing to the power of the six doors, or are you seeing the woman's legs weak? …4. Fenglingdu. One second the senior sister held the fox and refused to give it to them, and the next second the fox ran away and she claimed that it was her responsibility to help them find it. It felt like she was forced to write this in order to act with the Condor Heroes... After reading more than 30 chapters, there have been three times when women had grudges with other men (Yan Ge, Long Mei, Qiu Xin)... Is the protagonist's life experience real or fake? I couldn't understand it. What the princess and the monk said to the protagonist was so foggy and confusing... When the time traveler Xue Baoyu appeared, it was as uncomfortable as seeing shit. My first reaction was to pull down the latest chapter to see if the time traveler was dead... Also, I read in the book review section that the emotional scene might be about forgetting each other, and I didn't dare to read anymore. Someone in Longkong commented that the first 10 chapters of this book are about food and grass, followed by hay. Personally, I think it makes sense... In summary, the author's writing skills are first-rate and his ability to write stories is third-rate.

Online articles emphasize a sense of immersion, but there is almost no sense of immersion in this book. The protagonist rarely has any psychological activities. We all know that the protagonist is a normal person with feelings, but we can hardly see the protagonist expressing likes and dislikes. There is no joy when seeing good people, and no disgust when seeing evil people. It is not that the protagonist has no emotions, but that the author did not write them out. The plots are like people wearing blank masks performing pantomime. We can see them raising their hands and walking, but we just don't know what they think. There are no explanations in the plot that should be explained. For example, the question asked at the top of the post is, why does Yan Ge want the protagonist to fight for his life? Have no idea. Is the protagonist reluctant to do this? Are you unhappy? We don't know either. As a web novel, we actually don't even know what the protagonist is thinking, so how can we begin to feel immersed in it? Because of this kind of writing that should be explained but not explained, we can't figure out why Long Mei repays the protagonist for saving her life, but takes the protagonist to Peach Blossom Island and ignores her. She allows a few villains to tease the protagonist and shows no sign of seeing her again after a few days. Is this woman not aware that her life was saved, or is she just cold-natured? The protagonist discovers that his newly rescued girlfriend is a martial arts prodigy, but instead of taking her back to Huashan, he drags his girlfriend around and teaches him martial arts while running. Is the protagonist qualified to start a sect and teach his own disciples? I'm not afraid of teaching such a natural prodigy bad. Now that I have seen the end of the Xiantan Tea Party, I feel that everything has been sketched out, all the plots have only one rhythm, and everyone looks pale. It's easy to excel in mixed martial arts, because most of the characters have been set up in advance. As long as the protagonist is written well, it won't be too bad. It's a pity that both the protagonist and the supporting characters in this novel are equally boring.

I am an old bookworm, of course I am. I can hardly read Dian Niang's books, let alone Creation. I have no love. Why can't I find a good book popular? When it becomes popular, there will be more words, and it will be fun to read. Please add more, and please become popular! ! !

It starts to be understandable on Huashan Mountain, but ends on the Sun. Is it going to be a fantasy? ! What the hell is playing chess in the world? Change history? ! ! 😥 Since it's a martial arts show, let's show off some heroic spirit 🤫 The world is far away? Should I become a monk or join a Taoist temple? The content is okay. Why are the introduction and title of the book so frustrating? 🥵 Afraid of attracting attention?

That Yan Ge inexplicably gave the protagonist a way to die together and asked him to die. The protagonist was also very weird. He asked him to die without asking any reason... Although he didn't die in the end. It makes me sick, I feel like Yan Ge looks like a **. Can the author explain the cause and effect?

😃 The author has written several female characters related to the protagonist. How to arrange them in the end?

If the results are not ideal, let's advertise by ourselves.

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