Qinhai God of Cooking

Come on for the new book🤭😊🌹

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is detailed. It is not as rough and unclear as mine. It is hard to imagine. Regarding the plot, I seem to have written only one-third of it because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure. I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the top priority of a work, and the author has done it. Especially Ning Lefeng, I particularly like this character. When I started reading, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting, and after reading a few chapters, it was pretty good. The author's description contains many techniques, and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.

Come on 😊🌹

If the fish bone gets stuck in the throat, it is easy for the cultivator to spit it out. Ning He Feng is so bad, the cultivator is not afraid of fish bones. Although they are stuck, the idea is good,

12 Years ago, there were demons and demons, men and small pagodas, no lives in the sea, no career, and my writing skills were too poor. They almost all had dialogues and needed more structure and explanation.

Have a nice trip home😊🌹