Lan Tian Ji

The author's writing style is very good. You can't tell that this is his first novel. It doesn't have a sense of youthfulness. It is really a masterpiece. Keep up the good work!

This book gave me a completely different feeling than any other book on the same subject. It's really great! Give it another silent thumbs up~

Very well written, I just wish you could update it faster

After reading so many chapters, I really can't help but sigh. It can be seen that the author is very careful. It seems that the words are very simple and there is no gorgeous rhetoric.

I'm ashamed that I didn't even think of voting for you until now when I was reading the book. I looked at the wall and thought about it, hehe!

The article is very novel and the plot is very attractive. Today, when there are so many works, I am really happy to see such works... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers!

It means that I can never read other books except this one... Just like the plate of egg fried rice in God of Cookery, author, why!

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The writing style of this novel is considered to be good among online articles. The author's writing is not rough, smooth and not cumbersome. I look forward to its future development.

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Does this dragon soul still have independent consciousness? And almost killed the protagonist? Then what's the use of it? ! Refining it quickly! Stop dragging your feet! !

The levels are too vague, and you don't know the effects of the opponent's moves at all. It's like an ancient novel, where two gangsters fight, the two bosses attack each other, and a group of younger brothers behind them cheer. I also feel that the author does not want to clearly determine the level of the protagonist to wirelessly improve the protagonist's combat power. But this is impossible, because the level of that world has been determined, and it feels almost like covering the sky. The protagonist's own level is blurred, so that we can't feel whether the protagonist is awesome or powerful. In other books, the protagonist pretends to be B because we readers know that the protagonist is very powerful and can leapfrog the level to fight. Once the protagonist's own level is blurred, it is no fun for the protagonist to pretend to be B. It feels like he is teasing B and has no sense of substitution. I feel tired after reading a few chapters

I have written so many chapters, but I still don't want to practice. I am still wandering around in a small corner. The pace is too slow.