Destroy the World

Got hit head-on by the subway and turned into a pancake

😚 It's good-looking. It's really good-looking. If I don't like it, I'll follow it from the creation of the world to the starting point. Pipuyang's book is so enjoyable. I've given it 10,000 likes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🌹🌹

Reading this book reminded me of the invincible lucky star. It can be said that the relationship between luck and misfortune is always very eye-catching. The reason is that the reader does not know the next change in the fate of the protagonist, so it always gives the reader a new and fresh feeling. It can be said that the protagonist is a guy with bad luck and good luck. Fortunately, he is a kind-hearted guy, and he met the old man and the transfer technique that changed his destiny. To say that he has bad luck is naturally the golden finger of this book. Judging from the opening text, this beginning seems a little delayed. The things described before, such as being almost injured by a flowerpot, etc., Are all meant to highlight the protagonist's unlucky attributes. The reversal of fate of a small character is always attractive. I think the beginning of the first chapter should focus on this contrast. Ning Yihang is a kind-hearted but unlucky rich second generation. Something bad will happen every day. After twenty years of being unlucky, his luck finally exploded one day. From this perspective of unlucky and not unlucky, the setting I suggest is that Ning Yihang must be unlucky once a day, but this event is very random, and this unlucky event will also bring variability to his life, thus creating suspense. Just like climbing a mountain and encountering rock collapse. But since he turned twenty, his luck in life has changed. It can be set so that he will encounter something lucky once a day. In this case, something very interesting will happen. It is difficult to predict whether he will have a red hand or a black hand. Just like if Yihang wants to speculate in the stock market, it is very likely that it will either fall to the limit and lose money, or it may rise sharply, which is completely unpredictable. In terms of the character's personality, the protagonist is optimistic and kind-hearted, with a little bit of wisdom and wisdom. I think it is a good character template. Don't be too anxious to start the romance plot. I think the most exciting part of the novel is how the protagonist uses the golden finger of luck to improve his strength and bring benefits at the beginning, so that it can be written in a very YY way. The above is my personal opinion. If anything is too straightforward, please forgive me.

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