A Swordsman Traveling in the World of Martial Arts

Is it the broken Sister Feng? Recommending Sister Feng is the only way to taste...

I just read the first two volumes, and I keep saying that the internal strength is insufficient, the nine yin is not good, and the nine yang is not practiced... So is your nine yin a good secret for healing injuries? Isn't it good for the nine yang to stimulate the potential?

It's a pity that it's so bad, the swordsman was well written.

Although this book is too clumsy, I still want to say that when it writes about swordsmen, it still writes about martial arts swordsmen, and it doesn't write about the world of Lu Xiaofeng. This is the biggest failure.

I remember being harmonized for a long time, and then the ban was lifted again.

It's too scattered, a bit of a stream of consciousness. I've read a lot of urban literature, so I'm not very used to this kind of literature...[Fn=4_5]

The description of a swordsman should focus on the details, such as Ximen's bathing and changing clothes, etc. These detailed descriptions are to support a swordsman's attitude towards the sword. Take a good look at what you write next. Are you still a swordsman? It feels like it's just a bit of a joke. For example, the scene where Xiao Li flies the knife almost has no sense of existence. It's like copying a book and doesn't bring you in at all. Also during the sword competition and duel, it felt like chewing wax, tasteless, and did not describe the spirit and power of a swordsman at all. In Swordsman, for example, if you reach your current level, there shouldn't be many people who are worthy of drawing your sword. You should be more of a spectator and collect swordsmanship. But Nan, when you met Tian Boguang as soon as you came here, you started to draw your sword and kill him. Why did you kill Nan? Because he was a ~yin~ thief. It feels too much. To put it bluntly, he is not worthy of you to draw the sword. Even if he is worthy, there is a reason, such as his sharp knife. If you want to try it, you need to write out these foreplays. You are a swordsman, not a martial arts hero. Not Batman Iron Man etc. Not professional at all. You have so much foreplay, saying that you live to pursue the highest realm of swordsmanship, but the things you do are all what a hero should do, so what does it matter to you? To sum up, you are a swordsman~~~not a swordsman. Let's distinguish the two.

It's getting harder and harder to write, it's been broken so many times, where else can I wear it, Covering the Rain? Tianlong? Storm?

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This thing must be a huge hole that cannot be filled. The only way to solve it is to throw it into the parallel world worldview...

No, I can no longer see such a serious and pretentious protagonist. This kind of protagonist's character is not suitable to be written as a protagonist, but more suitable to be written as a legend. When writing a story, if you describe it sideways, you will be an excellent supporting character, the kind of legendary supporting character who lives in other people's memories.

You can go to heaven to try the pretentious content.

When I first watched it, I felt that the main character was an innocent person. The type suitable for offering.

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Cologne's style is pretty good, but, sorry, I don't like it.

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If you just want to stay on the new book list for a while, I hope that more updates will be added after it is put on the shelves. Keep it up to par, it's all set! At the same time, please beg the eunuch. And if it's a handicapped person... Well, I can only read it if it has 500,000 or 600,000 words.

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Maybe my account is 'toxic' and I can only post but not reply to posts. But sometimes I can reply again. I don't know why. I changed several browsers but it didn't work, but other accounts can. I have read all the book reviews, but because of the account, I can't reply 0.0 In them all to improve my sense of presence.

I have long wanted to watch this kind of plot where one person, one sword, one river and lake, and the three-foot Qingfeng people conquer the enemy country! ! ! I am becoming less and less interested in the plot of Nine Yins and Nine Yangs plus Nine Swords and Three Nine Stomachs. I have to learn this and that, and at the end of the day I will fight when I have no energy left. This path of spiritual exploration with one weapon is the real martial arts! ! ! Hello author, you have written my dream novel.

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(In martial arts novels, swordsmen such as Dugu Qiubai, Ye Gucheng, Ximen Chuixue, Yan Shisan, Xie Xiaofeng and other swordsmen have long been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. They all choose to write some animations that cannot be considered unconventional. The swordsman images in the game will be written in the book, and some will not be written, but simply posted. If you are bored and want to take a look, if you feel that LOLI's point of view is wrong, you don't need to discuss it and laugh it off. Or if you have a swordsman you like, you can also post it.) Name: Sword King's Twelve Hate (from Taiwan's puppet show "Thunderbolt Puppet Show") Life experience: Taking the sword as his name, fighting the sword to the end of the world, pursuing the true meaning of the sword throughout his life, he is a man who values love and justice, has a strong sense of justice, is natural and frank, and has no hypocrisy. He is a proud and unyielding lone knight in the sword world. When he first entered the world, he was famous for his pursuit of the fastest sword in the world. After being recommended by a mysterious girl to become a successor of Confucianism, his originally cold and arrogant personality gradually became more mature and wise. Under the guidance of famous teachers one after another, and his understanding and persistence of the sword, he continued to break through himself, climb to the top for the sword, achieve the perfection in his heart, and realize the ultimate sword intention. Character poem number: First, I hate that talented people are incompetent; Second, I hate that beauties are ill-fated; Third, I hate that the waves of the river never stop; Fourth, I hate that the world is cold and cold; Five, I hate that the platform is easy to leak; Sixth, I hate that the orchid leaves are too scorched; Seventh, I hate that puffer fish are very poisonous; Eighth, I hate that peanuts are thorny; Ninth, I hate that there are mosquitoes on summer nights; Ten, I hate that lilacs hide snakes; Eleven, I hate that I have no rival; Twelve, I hate that I am invincible in the world Personal evaluation: There are really many peerless masters of swords in Thunderbolt, but excluding those who use swords as weapons, there are not many real swordsmen left. The early riser Qiong Baji, Traces of the Wind, Recalling Autumn Years, And later Jian Wushang, the beginning of the sword, but no matter what, the sword master Twelve Hatreds is the number one swordsman worthy of the thunderbolt in my heart. It is not evaluated based on his cultivation, but his pursuit of the sword and the exploration of the spirit of the sword.