The Most Powerful Journey Across All Realms

It's so affectionate. If the protagonist falls in love with another woman in the future, it would be disgusting. I wonder if it's better to be more affectionate. What do you think, author? 😏😏

Invincible harem stories, definitely, they are basically all about characters.

The chapter about Uncle Jiu was really poisonous to me. Even if you don't like Ren Tingting, you just wrote it according to the plot and insisted on adding a slander scene. It exploded in an instant. The author didn't give any explanation? Don't you want to explain? , I can't bear your book

The level of extinction is only the same as Zhang Wuji and Song Qingshu, thank you. She is not qualified to be the same generation as Zhang Sanfeng. The one who is the same generation as Zhang Sanfeng is Guo Xiang. Zhang Sanfeng was over a hundred years old. At that time in the martial arts world, even Shaolin's Sandu was a generation shorter than him.

The front part is pretty good, but the seal memory written on the back is baffling. I feel like the author wanted to write about the time-travel and rebuilding of the power of sealed memories, but as he wrote, he felt that he couldn't get the desired effect and then changed it, so I felt very confused after reading it. No more girls, harem! ! I didn't think about it for a moment. 😥 But overall it's pretty good, and it's worth a look if you like this kind of thing.

This opening scene is a bit awesome!

. . . If Zhao Min doesn't accept it, don't write so affectionately!

Looking at the introduction, the beginning is the Three Divine Books of the Model Worker Gold series, and it comes from the opposite direction. Just write one like this. If you write all three, you will be directly advised to quit.

Why later. When traveling through time. All must be sealed. Own strength and memory. Don't understand.

Adopt a daughter. Adopt a daughter. What's going on if you don't accept the daughter? It's a harem.

After writing so many words, the plot construction is still so sloppy! Especially when it comes to emotional descriptions, is the author a virgin who has never been in love? I'm speechless!

The writing of Jiang Ye is okay, but the sudden interruption is a sign of eunuchs. In your book, we will not wait until the protagonists are all dominant before reading the plot of Jiang Ye!

Zz Author, where is your black jade intermittent cream? I write a little bit here and a little bit there, it's a mess.

The author's character creation was very good at the beginning, but it became more and more crooked as it went on. Like most novels, the results faltered after a while. By Iron Man 1, he had become a completely bad guy. He was ruthless, unscrupulous, took things by force, and urinated blood. Damn, such a good subject matter was ruined for nothing!

Judging from your introduction, the first three worlds all contain water characters 😡😡😡

This was written by two people, I guess. The first forty or so chapters are okay, but the later chapters are rubbish.

The fusion system is very good. I wonder if it has written about Naruto or One Piece? You can fuse the Sharingan to collect the Eye Technique. Fusion of the Sharingan Rinnegan Byakugan is also good. Pirates can also collect Devil Fruits to fuse xD

I didn't want the protagonist to have too many unnecessary concerns, so I wrote the protagonist's grandfather to death, and then found so many harem beauties for the protagonist to care about. It turns out that in the eyes of the author, the grandfather is so unimportant.

I originally wanted to watch it, but when I saw the comments saying that the protagonist is devoted to love, I didn't want to watch it. Or was she devoted to love from the beginning? If the heroine is an ordinary person, then I would like to ask, the protagonist has reached a high level of cultivation. When I look at the heroine's body, her face is full of mites, her mouth is full of bacteria, her body and vagina are full of bacteria, it makes me sick just thinking about it. The most disgusting thing is that the heroine is written about traveling through the heavens,

Zhang Wuji is so unparalleled in martial arts, Yang Guo is so in love with his teacher and student, Qiao Feng is so heroic, Qian Yun is tired of it all. If these three were written as despicable, insidious villains, etc., They might still be worth reading.

Many Infinite Streams go from the low world to the high world, and then to the high world, the protagonists fight across levels.

The author writes about what's going on there in Chapter 45. He can't write the first sentence but not the next one.

Will the night be eaten by a dog?

Why do I think ⊙_⊙This book will be cool

The front part is okay, but the back part has no idea what to write.

After the founding of the People's Republic of China, the protagonist was not allowed to become a spirit, and the protagonist no longer dared to stand out in the real world.

Why are we only updating one chapter a day now?

Author, if the beginning is bad, the book will be bad.