My Dragon Girl

The biggest failure is Shangguan Zhixuan. I hate this woman so much that I only saw about 10 pictures. Even if she is a cousin, I didn't know you before, but she comes to someone else's house to teach someone a lesson for no reason. What a snake spirit! I guess the iceberg will melt after that. To be honest, I really hate this kind of plot. It's not that I hate it when I get tired of it, but I never liked it in the first place.

First of all, the title, a light novel-like title, does not have the warm atmosphere that a light novel should have. I want to write a passionate story but cannot create that atmosphere. This in itself will lose most readers who are interested in light novels. Furthermore, the storyline may be changed to another continent or something, but there are still people who watch it. When watching modern cultivation, they basically want to watch "The Strongest Abandoned Young Man" and "Star Ring" and other urban trampling of people. What does this nondescript story of yours count? It's better to change the world and change the category, maybe there will be a chance to put it on the shelves. Finally, and most importantly, the writing style. How can I write a novel with such poor writing style? It's obviously not the plot of Xiaobai's novel, but it's only Xiaobai's writing style. What is it? If the writing style of your next book is still like this, I suggest you just write about Long Aotian as you said above!

🤭🤭It's a good plot. I'll deliver the tickets tomorrow, but I voted for someone else today. It's embarrassing[fn=2_3]

As in the title, I'm asking for advice, a venomous tongue, and a slap in the face. As long as you don't say "Author, you are not suitable for writing novels", you can do whatever you want. I will ignore this sentence even if I see it.