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I just saw the third chapter, it's really poisonous. The protagonist's golden finger can use the least number of source points. Learn ordinary skills (excluding extraordinary skills such as fireball), and I am the protagonist. When I go to the world of Sword Art Online, I first learn the following skills: "Professional hacking and anti-tracking technology", "Counter-detection technology", "Professional-level detective technology", "UFC Unlimited Fighting Champion and the all-round fighting skills of wilderness survival special forces", "Parkour skills of the top ten masters in the world who have parkoured with Chongqing", "Special Forces-level wilderness camouflage skills", "Cold weapon proficiency" "Firearm Proficiency", "Car Driving", "English Proficiency", "Professional Level Cooking", "Master Level Disguise", "Professional Bone Shrinking Skills and Jujitsu", "Master Level Makeup Technique", "Master Level Voice Changing", "Master Level Acting", "Professional Level Momentum", "Professional Level Traditional Chinese Medicine Acupoint Map Skills", "Human Weakness Skills", "Wilderness Survival Skills", "Human Body Power Skills", etc., Learn dozens of skills. Then he disguised himself as a woman, then had a hidden sword in his sleeve, and the hidden sword was poisoned. Wear a ring on your hand, put a bulletproof underwear on your clothes, install a few simple land mine triggering devices on the villain's path, and then aim at the villain from a distance with a recurve bow and arrow coated with poison. Do not reveal your head until the target is injured or seriously injured.

I read your books on other websites...

Poison, it feels really poisonous. The protagonist is no different from a mentally retarded person. The various operations that lower IQ are really hard to watch.

The author has a big heart, but his vision and fantasy ability are very weak. After reading half of it, he went back and forth between a few novels. This also shows that the author usually reads very few novels. The author mentioned before about other people's books. In fact, the author should see yourself more clearly, because you are not even as good as the authors you disparage. Do you know how I view your novels? I read it every 5-6 chapters, because the chapters in the middle are about hydrology per content.

What happened at the beginning? Is there any misunderstanding about the word "strong"? Strength brings confidence, not confidence brings strength. People like that are just middle-schoolers.

I re-read it. I feel numb for a protagonist who worships Buddhism and belittles Taoism.

This book is quite good. It is about spiritual cultivation and contains the author's own thoughts. It is my favorite type. What I like is someone who is so supreme that he forgets his feelings, and he is in love but not exhausted. The biggest poisonous point: 1. The author writes about the realm of Yuanshen, comparing it with the seventh level of ghost cultivation in "Yang Shen" (it should be right, there is a big difference), and comparing it with Pangu and the saint. In particular, the author supports the concept of parallel time and space. I don't know how to view the realm of Da Luo. It may be that the author does not have this setting, so he does not write about it. 2. The protagonist is so old that he actually likes Bulma. Yes, that's right, Bulma in Dragon Ball. Damn it, I was completely confused. I was glad that there was no incident with her later, so I reluctantly resisted. 3. I have been messing around with low-level martial arts. At most, I am Yang Shen. There seems to be a technology side behind me, and then the protagonist succeeds? It's unbelievable, so after watching it, I couldn't stand it anymore and couldn't hold on. I'm sorry.

A friend in the storytelling section said that he would write about Immortal Rebellion, Seeking Demons, Wu Po, Wizard World, Swallowing the Starry Sky, Galaxy Emperor, Dragon Ball, etc. I would say there are quite a few in this category~ Search the starting point and there are many such fans, so don't follow the trend. The author can just write according to his own wishes.

I don't know if the author saw it or not. At the beginning, when he traveled through the sword and saw Kirito being attacked and dodged, he complained about the protagonist's aura. Does it make people think that all of Kirito's efforts have been eaten up by dogs? Then he suddenly jumped out to gain favor. You have to rely on others to achieve your goals, and you are jealous of others. It feels so disgusting.

As a quasi-infinite novel, I feel that the strength of the protagonist cannot be based on combat power. It is too cliché to destroy a city, destroy a country, or destroy a star. On the other hand, it is easy to collapse when encountering a world of unreasonable talk. I once conceived an infinite flow novel in which the protagonist's strength changes depending on the world. Some worlds have weak rules, and energy and laws can be easily controlled. After the protagonist enters, the strength will be greatly increased. But in a world like the real world where laws are strict and it is not easy to obtain energy, the power displayed by the protagonist will drop significantly. In this way, there will be no plot where Wang Chao enters the advanced world and is tortured by small soldiers. The protagonist seeks detachment, and external strength is just a tool to protect himself. The real pursuit is the step-by-step improvement of the first, second, and third levels, and inner sublimation.

The writing style and plot of this book are really not good, there are many big and small poisonous points, and the logic in some places does not make sense. I really can't stand it anymore. But I can see obvious progress in the author Qi Hun's book. In my opinion, that book is very good. Come on, author!

The useless protagonist was persuaded to quit. Did you write the protagonist based on yourself? Do you feel that what you write is very real and literary? I just feel that the main character is useless and can no longer be useless.

The author is a very creative person with wild ideas. But I failed in Chinese writing! Having read so many novels, the author is indeed very creative. But it's a pity that a book and a story can only bear so much, but this book has too many ideas. Not only do I have to write about infinity, I also have to write about the real world, and I also have to write about creating space. I don't know how other readers feel, but I myself felt "dizzy" after reading it. Before this book, The World of Demi-Gods, I personally believed that it had the potential to become a god, but after The Demi-Gods, I felt that the author was too ambitious and included all kinds of creative and interesting things. It's like a TV series. It's about a romantic drama that turns into a feud between rich families, then a kung fu movie, and finally it turns into an alien invasion area and then it turns into a doomsday movie. It's too big a mess🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

I remember that this small world ascended and merged into the six-leaf world... It didn't fall at all. It became an island outside Liuye Continent...

From the beginning to the end, I feel that the protagonist is really useless and has no IQ.

The 22nd picture is the most disgusting. The protagonist kneels down and licks the government. It's completely unnecessary.

Was Sword Art Online eaten by the author?

I couldn't stand watching it until I got to the middle of it, I felt so bored

It's been 10 years, how are you all?

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Any protagonist like this can succeed! I feel like I can do it too! Why don't you give me the ring? This book cannot be boring to read!

Don't put chuunibyou and normal people together. When talking about Kirito, I will say that he is not the protagonist, that is, he is a loser. If he doesn't study well, he only knows how to play games.

Sorry! I just read a pirated version of this book, because I think the author is interesting and what he writes is very interesting to me, so I came to see the author and prepare to support the author! I hope the author will continue to work hard! Keep creating a masterpiece!

The first volume is mainly written about the protagonist obtaining artifacts, crossing swords to obtain world seeds, developing virtual worlds to harvest spiritual power, and emphasizing the need to focus on the cultivation and growth of the soul, spirit and will throughout the book More than a dozen chapters, quite a lot of poisonous points The character's behavior and personality at the beginning are too poor for the so-called growth The communication between people is a bit childish and has a Japanese comic flavor Personally, I feel that many details of the settings are average, For example, at the beginning of LOL, there is a big gap between computer games and real people. Magic is played at the beginning, and there is no setting for how players use it. Players play it every day to earn money, which feels too boring to write. (If the opening requires a world that is constantly used repeatedly, then gun games or Dead by Daylight are also good.) Since you have this benefit for others, do you still care about the audience? Even if you are tortured when you come in, the benefits are real, and players will rush in There is also a virtual world opened for mental strength at the beginning of the game. It feels unnecessary. There is nothing wrong with being more powerful and mysterious There is also a painful setting, which is not impossible, but writing it out just strengthens the player's will. . . . There is also a plot where the protagonist is worried about being found out. The author himself wrote it and said it was impossible, so why did he write this plot? Besides, it would be okay if it was leaked And it is set that other worlds are real, so when it comes to the high-demon world later, the boss will catch you and refine it in an instant (I didn't read it later, but I read the comments and said that he also revealed his identity as the main god...) Personally, I would rather just have an ordinary protagonist and an ordinary beginning The author has thought of many things and expressed them in the book, but I don't know why he still wrote this plot

Too much bullshit makes it look bloated.

Don't push that king, he's still lv3 after writing books for more than ten years

Revealing that he is the main god, even if the writing is beautiful, it is still useless 😡 Do you know how many people have had their books abandoned in such a shocking way?

Either all anime or all novels, this kind of hodgepodge is ridiculous just thinking about it, and the force value collapses too easily 😅😅😅

Is it necessary to explain over and over again in the first chapter how your novel is written? Is this funny?

I have added it to my collection. I have a lot of ideas and the author's writing is very good. This title makes people want to click on it. I came to visit with my work "Old man picks up rags in time and lives by making bad movies". Thank you!