The Immortal Doctor of the City

Boring. A zombie is afraid of everything. It's a disgrace to zombies.

Why is no one reading such a good book...?

Um... Isn't the Drought Demon a woman?

The author's portrayal of the protagonist is inconsistent, sometimes strong, sometimes weak, I mean psychologically. Even when a strong person is weak, their inner strength remains. I don't understand this protagonist; he's a reckless, impulsive fool who acts without any strategy. He's reckless, which is fine, but he's also cowardly. He neither thinks nor acts wisely, and the whole story relies on middle-of-the-road explanations to pad out the word count…

Ahem, just a quick plug, please forgive me 😌

Wow, so much water! And so many typos! 😂

I've recently been reading a novel about Saiyans in another world, but the author updates it rather slowly, saying that you need to reach a certain number of favorites. If you like this type of content, you can bookmark it and encourage the author to update more. The book is titled "The Biography of Ace".

Hello author, I apologize for bothering you, but my work is really poor. Could you please offer some feedback on my novel, "The Spirit Swordsman"?

Why use a harem? I feel like 1v1 is enough for this kind of novel.

I feel like the main character is a bit too much of a character, I don't really like him.