The Legend of Immortality

It was great to see Fei Chang 10 years ago

This book was originally quite good, but unfortunately, it was uninteresting because the protagonist had to take a family of dozens of people to become immortals. No one else can cross this single-plank bridge. When you get to the protagonist, it's easy and casual! Not rigorous

The first few dozen chapters copy the plot of Mortal Seven Mysteries, with Goldfinger changing the bottle into a stove. Euphemistically called: Mortal Flow

It's so obvious that it's a plagiarism from A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, and Qidian is also allowed to publish it? ? ?

I had been patient enough to see the pill formation, but I couldn't stand it anymore. The author has a mentality of trying to please others and has little contact with women. In order to win the trust of his senior brother, the protagonist actually revealed all the secrets of his golden finger. There are too many things like this that cannot survive more than three chapters. Then comes the emotional description. The beautiful women I meet all like the protagonist and even like him. It feels good to be a pretty girl, right? In addition, the descriptions of girls are all so cliche. Come on, girls in their seventies or eighties, even if they look innocent and shy, they must be pretending. However, this is a common problem among domestic authors, because living in a society that opposes equality between men and women is the author's true inner fantasy.

I don't have any objection to copying from ordinary people, as long as it's good-looking, but for some reason, I told my brothers about the golden finger and decisively abandoned the book, so there's no need to say that I'm dragging my feet, but the author still wants to say it's a hard work for the author with so many chapters.

When I saw the protagonist forcing his parents to become immortals, I didn't want to watch it anymore. To become immortal is to change your destiny and go against your destiny. It's not easy for you. You also have to take care of your family. It's so unrealistic!

The protagonist is stupid, don't look at it, it's too low-intelligence and extremely poisonous.

No, even if the author wants to imitate a mortal, there is no need to keep the main plot exactly the same. It's a pharmacist again. I'm speechless. If you change some irrelevant backgrounds and names and copy the rest, you're thinking nonsense. You might as well just write a fanfic.

How come it's a bit like a mortal cultivating immortality?

After reading the 1800th chapter of this book, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I skipped to the last chapter. The feeling this book gives me is chaos in one word. The style is chaotic. It starts off as a mortal, but then the cool writing has no brain flow. The world hierarchy is chaotic. Now that I read it, I don't even know what the outline of the book's world of cultivating immortals is like. The realm of cultivation is confusing, and there is no complete correspondence between the various systems of cultivation. It feels like a temporary name was given, and there is no clear understanding after reading it. The main point There is too much nonsense in the whole book. The protagonist just practices for a day or two, and a few hours is worth other people's decades and thousands of years of practice. Later, I slowly abandoned realm and replaced it with understanding. It was a good thing that I could understand everything in a short time. Everyone is stupid, but the protagonist is awesome. The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. Besides, the protagonist started to lead his family to cultivate immortality, but the 250 operations led to the family being wiped out, which was the biggest failure.

Can anyone figure out the cultivation level and item level of this book? It's a mess, you can't even understand it if you look closely, and there are countless inconsistencies.

When I saw someone saying that the protagonist of this book would take his parents to practice cultivation, I lost interest in reading it and gave up decisively.

After reading hundreds of chapters, how can I put it, I am not decisive in killing, fighting for hegemony is just a lamp, but brotherhood is still a shadow. Compared with longevity, brotherhood is nothing but a lamp, and basic human nature cannot be understood! !

The protagonist can be as stupid as possible Various basic skills, the protagonist's messy expressions and psychology, no scheming, everything is shown casually, friendship, there are enemies, all kinds of tails, don't care, troublesome things are left to the right, the tone is also big, it's just a waste of goldfinger opportunities, if the character image is not well written, what's the point? ? ? Originally a good book, but the main character's stupid manipulation makes him angry to death. He is obviously very capable, but he just wants to give it away. How can it be so easy to meet a powerful person, how can it be so easy to find it casually?

Why does it feel like it is just a copy of ordinary people, without innovation!

The biggest failure of this book is that it brought a bunch of young and old cultivators, and even though they had a golden finger, they were not killed for the treasure, so I abandoned the book.

The God-Destroying Curse, a low-key book recommendation...

The character traits of the protagonist cannot be described, they are very random, the emotional description is rubbish, and the only thing that is acceptable is the map and dungeon design.

In fact, the book "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality" and this book are both earlier than "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality". "The Record of Hundred Refiners to Cultivation to Immortality" was too long and too long to be written, otherwise there would be no such thing as "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality".

You copied the story of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality.

Too many useless chapters and a bunch of stuff.

Silly b, big stupid b, what kind of protagonist is this written? The more I read, the angrier I get.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Was this book copied by a mortal? I don't know when Mortal first wrote it, but I remember it was written more than ten years ago and I read it at the time. Can anyone give me an answer?

This should be a book about gods, right?

It's a bit licking, and why so many people know about Goldfinger? It's a failure.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "Cleaning the Sutra Pavilion at the beginning, I will complete the incomplete skills", mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ online will not reduce the intelligence, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

You bastards out there, check when this book was written.