Tokyo Taoist Priest

Looking at it now, this book has the immature writing skills of the author in his early years. The characterization may also be slightly flawed. However, every time I see the protagonist's dates with the people he likes, I feel warm in my heart. It is better to say that I am very envious, as if I have met the girl I like. As a novel about daily life, I personally think it is very good and worth reading.

It would be nice if the protagonist's identity as an emperor in his previous life was not written. It is hard to imagine that a man who was close to the best in the world in spiritual practice after being defeated from a soldier to the throne would be kind after his reincarnation. He could let go of a woman who had murderous intentions towards him and acted on him. The reason was that the woman was beautiful and weak and could not hurt him. After hundreds of years of life, there was no concept of eradication, which perfectly promoted truth, goodness and beauty. It would be better to just set him to be a mountain village alone in his previous life, practicing Taoism and then come out. The kind of person who is invincible in the world. If you say he has a defective character and needs to join the world, that's fine. But the kind of person you fight for the throne step by step and then be defeated and finally practice Taoism. You have experienced the lowest valley in life and enjoyed the highest peak. It is really contrary to be so simple. Every time I see this kind of plot, I hope that the little person who was ignored and let go by the protagonist can rise up and not hurt the protagonist. You can consider the people around the protagonist and give him a lasting enjoyment.

In the last two days of the competition for monthly tickets, it was an eye-opener for me. The book review area was flooded with black books by a large number of vests. The most hilarious thing was when a certain vest shouted: "You shameless guy, when are you going to update?" According to my subscription record, the author is Quanqin Update, so I am very satisfied with such a mindless joke. This is the funniest thing I think today, thank you Brother Ma Jia.

Although some of the previous parts were poisonous and acceptable, Chapter 43 was really disgusting to me. I felt aggrieved after killing so many people, and those who were killed were all scoundrels. Human nature, and killing for the sake of killing, killing rogues to comfort yourself is just killing bad guys, and the protagonist has no contact with her, and the other party goes to save people without even knowing who the protagonist is, and when she arrives, she says: I'm sorry I'm late. I am really convinced ┗┃ ■ ┃┛No matter whether they are bad or good people, they are all human beings. As long as you kill someone, it is a crime. It's impossible not to convict you just because you said you killed a bad guy. And the protagonist's previous life was from the Ming Dynasty. Was there beer at that time? I drank it without saying anything, as if I drank it every day, and the liquor I drank at that time, even if it is now processed into denatured alcohol, for a person who is addicted to alcohol, buying liquor is also buying liquor. It is impossible to buy beer that you have never drank before. You also said that minors in Japan are not allowed to drink, so the protagonist must have never drank it in the first place. Since he has never drank it, how can he buy beer? And are you sure he is really addicted to alcohol? Rather than adding it on a whim when you were writing? Although the novel is fake, you still need some basic logical thinking, right?

I think the awkward point of this book is how can a traditional Han Chinese tolerate the surname of a Japanese slave?

How should I put it? I feel like my only impression of this book is, would you like a cup of tea? Okay. Do you want coffee? I want it. I want it too. Let's have a drink together, come on, come on, everyone. . . . . . The whole story is just water, and it doesn't require you to be particularly enthusiastic or anything like that. You should have a main line at least. I looked confused.

Is the protagonist a good boy? Click to get the top skills, fall in love procrastinated, can you be more assertive with a powerful monk? Two girls like you, and they are ready to cut each other with swords, why can't you just accept them both? If it doesn't work, just choose one or reject both. What kind of flight is there in the mud? You are cowardly at this level. How did you compete with Zhu Yuanzhang for the world in your previous life? Are you paying for the land for free?

This book is incomparable to the rebirth of Japanese high school students

I casually browsed and came across this good book, which made me feel the faint yet distant aftertaste of daily warmth that I felt when I first read Awakening. I must give it a thumbs up.

What is written in Chapter 43, why do you still feel aggrieved after killing so many people? ? ? Dry

It's really poisonous and a brainless piece of writing. I can't stand it after seeing dozens of people killed. I can accept that occasionally a few chapters or even a dozen chapters are illogical, but I can't accept that only an occasional few chapters are logical.

It's been a long time since I've read a book in a serious way. This book is really a surprise. I'm used to reading about monsters and upgrades. This kind of relaxed and warm daily text is still very comfortable to read, and some fantasy things interspersed in the middle are not obtrusive. What impressed me most is that the portrayal of the characters is very good, and each of them is very comfortable. The characters all have their own colors, and even some small characters are well portrayed. For example, some characters in Onotei also have their own characteristics, but the ending is too hasty and leaves a lot of pitfalls. Is it because the author thought there were too many pitfalls and couldn't fill them up and ended it? 😎😎

Why don't you write it down? It's very interesting.

With hundreds of millions of money to throw away, one million fortunes can be told at a time. I am still a freshman in high school at the age of 16. Is there really anyone who can predict the halo of a pig's foot? , And that fortune-telling sign, you should check it out first, it can't be translated into Japanese, it's a rubbish novel, what a good subject matter, it makes you want to vomit after reading a few chapters

After reading about a hundred chapters, Pig Feet accompanied Girl 1 to kill people. Pig's feet said to Girl 1: Then take action! I will follow you from a distance, don't worry! Nothing will happen. As a result, after beating the girl 1 to kill the minions, I found that the girl 2 was also PKing with someone, and she just went up without saying a word. Finally, Girl 1 and Girl 2 worked together to cripple their opponent, but were accidentally killed and almost died. I just want to ask about Pig's Feet. It's been so long and you haven't come yet. Didn't I promise to follow you and nothing will happen? Damn, I'm still a cultivator. . . . Farewell

Real Taoist priests pursue immortality and strength, not skeletons in the mortal world. Every time I read Taoist novels, I can't leave after seeing a beautiful woman. If you want to really practice Taoism, you can't even get started. Even if you join, if you meet a woman, your cultivation will be broken.

It's just a daily series. The writing was okay in the early stage, but it was as bad as Tuo Xiang in the later stage. The whole book has no outline, no foreshadowing, and no passion. Even the only "Joker" character who resembled a villain was not written at the end and disappeared. The plot of recognizing the lover who I loved until death hundreds of years ago, I felt like I had seen a neighbor who I hadn't seen for a long time meet by chance, that kind of feeling: "So it's you?" "Yes, it's me. Are you surprised or surprised?" "So since it's you, let's go have a drink?" "Okay, let's go have a drink!" "Tons, tons, tons, tons, tons..." I was not moved at all, and almost laughed out loud. The author's writing power is limited, and I really can't complain about it. The later plot is no longer a question of writing power. It's just perfunctory and the ending has been hastily and I didn't want to write it. If you are not writing this book to make money, then no matter what the results are, you are responsible for finishing it carefully. If you are writing the book with the mentality of making money, then no matter what the results are, you should be responsible for the readers who stick to it until the end, even if only the last reader is still reading and liking your book! The popularity of great masters is all due to the accumulated readership of many books. The larger the data, the greater the number of visits. Many people like to read books with good scores directly. How can you still accumulate readers like this? It's impossible to accumulate loyal readers. You won't do it in this life. Your writing skills are not good and you are too lazy to improve. You can only rely on your mood to keep writing like this! Regardless of whether you read the book written by this author with this attitude, I will never read it in the future, thank you!

I have been reading this book since it was first published, and now I have discovered the biggest problem the author has when writing, and that is the lack of detailed description! I never think that online literature is not literature. Some people may think that online literature is just for beginners, but I can seriously say that this is all prejudice! There are many people who write online articles that can be updated and of high quality (such as Cuttlefish). However, judging from the author's level, the author is indeed a new author who lacks writing experience. But what I want to say is that although the level of new authors can still be improved, this also requires the author himself to consciously improve! And let's analyze the audience of this book – those born in the 90s who like anime and light novels! The vast majority of this audience group has a very rich imagination (that is, the ability to brainstorm) and a very delicate and complex heart (for example, me, if I like a certain anime and sometimes study it deeply, I will try to understand the deeper connotation!) Therefore, one thing that is very important for books similar to light novels and anime is that you need to describe the content of the book in sufficient detail, pay attention to details and rhetoric, and it is also recommended to add more detailed descriptions of the psychological activities of the female characters you want to portray! Although it is refreshing to advance the plot through dialogue, it also seems a bit thin! And for the author's writing style, you can refer to the original light novel of Shakugan no Shana. The style of this book has a deep and heavy feeling! Why do everyone like to read books with profound meanings? That's because the author has invested his own emotions and understanding into the world he wants to create, so the world described in a book with this meaning will appear real! It will make readers feel immersed! A superficial description that floats on the surface cannot achieve this! Therefore, I suggest here that the author learn more about this experience when reading books written by other people! I wish you smooth sailing on the road to becoming a god! Please improve it and give it a thumbs up! How many people are writing book reviews seriously like me these days? Rolling around in a cute way...[Fn=3_9]

It's not interesting at all. I've seen a lot of them. They're just people asking the protagonist to explain, in plain language.

Not bad, I've seen it before, it's not a system stream

No wonder there are superpowers in foreign countries and you are all reborn in foreign countries. Is there any justice?

By the way, when will the new book come out?

Only now do I understand that when writing romantic harem novels, it is not good to have too high a level of power. Just write about the strength of ordinary people, without internal strength, immortality, supernatural powers, etc. With these additions, the framework of the whole book will become much larger. After all, the smaller the book, the more sophisticated it is. The protagonist only needs to have a golden finger, (I think the system is best) and it must be slow-burning. Yes, it can also improve charm, strength, intelligence, and learning talents (this talent is fighting, dancing, acting, singing, etc.) (Ahem, this is obviously a system, I can't think of other cheats that can improve talents). If the strength is increased too fast, it will be no fun. After all, this is romance.

It is identified as the Japanese version of Urban Rebirth and Cultivation of Immortality. It can be used for entertainment. The routine is a little outdated because it is an old book.

Why does Lu Dongbin's disciple want to go to Japan?

The level is really average. It's just a late night snack. It's well written.

Now that I have become a Shido, can I still be saved?

Read on December 6, 2022

I like life stories very much, but this one is too watery, with repetitive plots and dialogues. Does the author have nothing to write?

Is the author still writing books? Which platform or account?