
The Chaotic Star River
乱星河
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 579k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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193Chapters
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7.2kRecs
91Fans
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Are you sure it's not bad? The ending is passed off in one stroke, and he becomes a patron saint because of his meritorious service?
[Comment] I wanted to make a comment on your article
But there is no way to start, because it speaks what is in my heart, I can only feel sad and keep everything silent. I hope my silence can create a calm for you, let your thoughts fly freely, and bring me a little touch.
[Comment] What should I say?
I feel that some unnecessary descriptions by the author can actually be deleted, so that the article will not appear to progress slowly.
[Comment] There are some beautiful women who feel more refreshed when they kill them. Especially the kind of woman with a twitchy head and an unrefined appearance.
There are some pretty women who feel more refreshed when they kill them. Especially the kind of woman with a twitchy head and an unrefined appearance.
[Comment] A little opinion
I feel that the description of details needs to be improved a lot. Hope to keep up the good work! We will all love your work! I also wrote a book, but I gave up because I couldn't hold on. Writing a book is really hard and not easy. Besides throwing away tickets, what else can we do? ? ? Brothers, what are you waiting for? Smash it! ! ! I'll smash it! !
[Comment] Keep up the good work!
Overall, the novel is very good, and the setting is relatively novel. However, I feel that the writing style still has room for improvement. It might be good to occasionally add a little description of the environment to enhance the atmosphere.
[Comment] Basic skills
Very good writing skills, clear ideas, distinctive characters, and will not be forgotten for a long time after reading.
[Comment] We must shape the male protagonist well
As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.
[Comment] Environment is important
Sometimes appropriate description of the environment can make the characters express their emotions more fully, so I hope the author can improve in this aspect.
[Comment] Good book, keep it now, wait until you lose weight and then kill it!
Good book, keep it now, wait until you lose weight and then kill it!