Spirit Eye Realm

The sentences are a bit cumbersome and the words are not polished enough, but the overall picture of the work is excellent. I hope that the next book can build a grand fantasy world!

Come on, God. Perseverance leads to success. As the saying goes, he who writes books is always written. Give you a poem. Persevere in writing a book, I can feel happy in one day, I always think about him, Inspiration comes in the middle of the night, We are all miserable people, I have shown my ugly face. Hahaha

Come on, you have great potential, you just lack polish and opportunities! Don't give up!

This was supposed to be in a fantasy world. Your category was wrong from the beginning, so you couldn't sign the contract. The paragraphs should be separated, the text should be concise, and the world view should be written to the readers step by step. It can be seen that you have made a lot of improvements later. Looking forward to your next book. Come on!