From Mortal Girl to Immortal

She was very wary at first, but then inexplicably insisted on going with the male lead she had just met. It's so fake.

What kind of ending is this? It's practically an ending that isn't an ending at all. The author is at a loss for words. Have they run out of ideas? Are they just leaving it to the readers' imaginations?

Wow, based on my experience reading novels, this was just the beginning, and then it was the ending! The female lead went to participate in the Danse competition and was killed by a group of people. The male lead came to find her and was also killed by others. The female lead's immortal abode was also destroyed, and she didn't wake up until 100 years later. The male lead searched everywhere for her, and that was the end. That's the end.

This ending... It seems like they just didn't want to write anymore and rushed to finish it.

There's too much internal monologue and narration, making the writing seem a bit superficial and fragmented. Keep it up, author!

The more I read, the more I realize how imaginative I am.

The protagonist of "The Great Era of Immortals and Demons" is not dark; it is the world that is dark. My lord's actions are not wrong; what is distorted is the law of this world. Let me trample on this sky and become a demon!