Mortal Girl Becomes Immortal

They are all rubbish and look like elementary school students' compositions. . .

This upgrade is too slow and boring to read. They are upgraded year by year. Two hundred chapters are not enough to become an immortal. I say goodbye and look for some genius literature. .

We should continue writing. Since we are becoming immortals, why do we only write about ascending to the spiritual world? What happened in the spiritual world? Continue writing until we become immortals.

I think it's very good-looking except for the big gold finger. It has no cp, no blood, and no pretentious plot. The ending was very rushed, it would have been nice to have had a lower part. Many buried threads ended without being made clear.