From Ordinary Girl to Immortal

These are all rubbish articles, like something a primary school student would write.

I thought it was great except for the overpowered plot device; it had no romantic subplots, no melodramatic twists, and no overly sentimental storylines. The ending felt rushed; I hope there's a sequel. Many plot threads weren't fully explained before the ending.

The leveling up is too slow, it's boring to read. It's all done on a yearly basis; two hundred chapters aren't even enough to become an immortal. Goodbye, I'm going to find some truly brilliant novels to read.

The story should continue. Since it's about becoming an immortal, why only write up to the ascension to the spirit realm? What happened in the spirit realm? Continue writing until the final immortality.