Age of Deification

That year, Xiaopang was defeated by Tsinghua and Peking University, and entered the top technical university in Shandong Lanxiang with a total score of 296 points. When the principal gave a speech to the freshmen, he roared and warned everyone: "You must work hard. If you don't work hard to play games every day, what is the difference between you and those from Tsinghua University and Peking University?! How can you live up to our Lanxiang: there is no charge for a one-month trial." Later, the fist excavator major that Xiaopang studied prepared to fight with the class next door due to some misunderstandings. Xiaopang was a bit fat at the time, so his classmates asked Xiaopang to lead everyone there. I never expected that I was in the wrong class. I kicked the door open arrogantly and found that it was the Sichuan cuisine class! There are more than thirty chefs inside, each with a kitchen knife, cutting shreds of meat. Xiaopang backed out without saying anything, and carefully closed the door again. [Url=Z3Ej6f]

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is meticulous. It is not as rough and unclear as mine, and it is hard to imagine. In terms of plot, I seem to have only one-third of what you wrote, because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure, and I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the most important thing for a work, and the author has done it. When I started reading it, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting and found it interesting. I read a few chapters and it was not bad. Looking at the author's description, it contains many techniques and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.

Arrange a supporting role for Momo~~~😁

I hope Strawberry's writing will become more and more beautiful, Mo Mo has been waiting for your updates~!

😁 Hidden in the sewers for many years, finally appeared

😃I think she has the potential to form a CP with Sister Han Yun...

I just want to ask if Sister Han Yun is okay (squinting smile)

I think it would be better if the Awakener uses a combination of moves. If he seeks death like Dinkxi, he can only be defeated one by one...

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I personally think there are several issues: 1. The setting of the apocalypse has too much of a visual sense of the Dark Blood Age + Global Evolution, including vitality, vitality attribute classification, mutated animals and plants, willow trees, etc. It feels uncreative and the two together are very messy. 2. The people who appear around the protagonist are dead with character, while the supporting characters have no outstanding character. I think that Qin Hao is a nice person, but I can't understand why the protagonist was able to save a useless woman like Shen in the first place, but was unwilling to take any risks to save Qin Hao. The role of Su Can was brilliant at first, but in the end, it became more and more useless, less and less existential, and his role was not as good as it was in the role. As for Shen Bing, it's not that I discriminate against her gender, this woman is just a vase. I want to say that you are fair and rich, why go to the hospital to be a nurse? If it were to set skills for her, it would actually be a bit mechanical. And his personality is too bad, he just holds him back at critical moments, and he is still able to think about things when all the bugs are around him. I really admire him. In short, these two people are like the protagonist's marionettes. The protagonist waits wherever he is told, and runs wherever he is told, without any thought or personality of his own. 3. Too much repetition. How many "beautiful young women" have appeared so far? The first Qin was nothing; the second Su, I felt a little uncomfortable, and then a Xiao appeared... Feelings: Any young woman the protagonist meets must be mature and beautiful... In other words, the women the protagonist meets are either cannon fodder. As long as they have some scenes and interactions with the protagonist, they must be beautiful... Is it possible? 4. It's still a matter of character of the protagonist and others. The protagonist initially gave me the impression that he is a man who is not moved by beauty and is quite moral. This is completely opposite to stallions like Li Qing. This is exactly the type of protagonist I like. Unexpectedly... I got to the last chapter and still failed. And after doing this to a woman, even if it was forced, you should regret it, feel helpless, and hate Liu Shu, right? The first thing that came to mind was the sexy thing. This was completely opposite to the protagonist's character setting. My impression of him suddenly fell off. 5. The plot arrangement is too rigid. For example, a supermarket is besieged by more than a dozen bugs. I still haven't figured out what the structure of the supermarket is, but when the author writes that bugs can't get in because the entrance to the first to second floors is too small, I want to ask: Don't bugs climb up the stairs from the outside wall? Well, even if they can't, this situation seems to me to be a good opportunity to grind monsters and increase experience, but no one thought of it. Of course, there are still many great things about this book. For example, I think the plot of the cat and the plot of Kong Shun are very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a good book about the apocalypse. 🤭🤭🤭