Anti-Travel Inn

After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Overall, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as a supplementary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

Author, do you want to summon Lu Bu to get in trouble with you?

Can the character of the protagonist be changed? Even though he has made up his mind and realized his pursuit, why is it that he still looks like a loser? What kind of people are summoned? Why are the waiters in the shop so speechless? And why are Diao Chan and Huan Huan people after the plot is over? Isn't it bad before the summoning plot starts? For example, Diao Chan is already married to Lu Bu, Huan Huan also likes Xu Ziling, why is she summoned here if she doesn't have sex? By the way, what kind of work does the author write? If it's a harem novel, I'm speechless. Are you planning to summon all the ** in the future? I hope the author will have more settings later, such as never touching the body or having sex, etc. As for science? The novel itself is no longer scientific! I hope the author will give you a big reply. These are suggestions, not criticisms.

The most disgusting thing about this kind of novel is that the summoned character does not listen to the protagonist. The author will definitely say that he must listen to the protagonist later, but sorry, this process must be very uncomfortable.