Muyingxianji

The author deserves a lot of encouragement. It is already very good to write a first novel like this. In terms of plot, this book is full enough. Emotionally speaking, the male protagonist does not have much sense of presence before the relationship is confirmed. Just met a few times and protected a few times. It's not even as strong as the emotion conveyed by Ge Xiaoqing In terms of the ending, it would be best not to leave any foreshadowings in the story about Floating Spirit Continent, or the author plans to start a sequel at some point. Because many readers have the habit and preference of reading long articles. Especially for Xianxia readers, you have foreshadowing of the Floating Spirit Continent in almost 70%-90% of the book. This is actually an obvious signal in the eyes of bookworms. There is still a long way to go before you finish the book, and even 50% of the book is not finished. Friends who like to watch Xianxia know that Xianxia is basically about jumping between the mortal world, the spiritual world, and the fairy world. In other words, when this Xianxia mode reaches its peak, it changes the picture and starts again. This can be regarded as the natural advantage of Xianxia novels being easy to write and interesting. In short, the author's writing is still very good. There is nothing wrong with the fairy tale being a little wordy.

It's so long-winded. I could bear it at first, but after reading a hundred chapters I couldn't stand it any longer. There are over two million words, probably one and a half million, all of which are the heroine's inner monologue plus explanations of various reasons. I'm vomiting blood, giving up, it's a waste of time.

To be honest, I personally felt it was quite wordy, the plot progressed slowly, and the early stages were a bit frustrating, making it a bit unwatchable.

It's such a long-winded thing, it's so annoying, it can be explained in 3 sentences, but he insists on using 10 sentences, because he wants to make up the word count or he just can't be concise.

Alas, I really can't stand it anymore. The old lady's foot-binding cloth. I've never seen a heroine who is so verbose and self-righteous and whose IQ is low.

It's too inky! I endured reading more than 120 chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. There are 100 chapters of nonsense! And the heroine has no sparkle at all!

It's super long-winded, one thing is explained over and over again, and it's over in one chapter; there are too many weird things, the characters are stereotyped, and the character changes are blunt; the heroine relies on luck all the way, and she has died countless times just by herself. Except for the author's own emphasis on describing her temperament as different from others, it cannot be seen that the mature mentality of the reborn person is irrational, and her emotions are too fickle. She always thinks that others are bad in one sentence, but in the blink of an eye she becomes grateful. Overall, it's not interesting. If you're bored, it's okay to watch.

At the beginning, there were a lot of drag bottles around the heroine, but finally they were all gone. Jin Dan began to accept disciples. The Nascent Souls of another continent were running around, and there were enemies there. She didn't want to improve herself, but she found drag bottles for herself. This book needs more water, and the whole process is running around for others. Luo Liba Suo, fight monsters to upgrade, why is it like watching a house fight, one book, one map, and several characters require hundreds of pages

It's so long-winded, like an old lady's foot-binding cloth. She has to explain 123,456,789 points for everything. At the end, she has to explain 123,456,789 points. The author has this kind of personality, so he deliberately made up the number of words. There are probably 100 chapters out of hundreds of chapters that are not just long-winded to make up the word count.

Ah, what a verbosity! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 It's so long-winded. How can there be such a long-winded novel? ! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Ahhhhh! What a mouthful! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

In fact, the writing style and narrative style are very good, but the writing is really verbose! If it is a long novel with 2,000 chapters, it would be normal at this pace, but there are only 600 chapters in total. When I wrote more than 100 chapters, I didn't even enter the sect. In the early stage, I wrote 60 or 70 chapters about the intrigues of a five- or six-year-old house fight. I was really worried about it! ! The house fighting life in the early stage was too depressing. Everyone just wanted to see the heroine be free and have room to grow after entering the sect. However, after finally reaching the 100th chapter, she found a reason to say that the original sect could not be entered. It really gave people the feeling that the old lady's foot bindings were smelly and too long And I don't think at all why the heroine could not continue to go to the original sect. Wasn't it because she was plotted by her teammates on the way to the trial? Just give up without even asking? It is said that the person who killed her is in the sect. The problem is that when they killed you, you were practicing at the third level of Qi training and she was practicing at the fifth level. The heroine survived the catastrophe and broke through to the sixth level of Qi training. She was one level higher than the other person and gave up with just one sentence? ? ? I feel that this reason really cannot convince the readers, but it is too deliberate to make the readers feel that "the author deliberately arranged this twists and turns of the plot" It feels like a pity really, it is a rare female video cultivation book with good writing skills

It's too ink-stained, a lot of nonsense, not good-looking, so I discarded it.

I was so anxious when I saw it that I really wanted to use my sword on the heroine and yell three times, "You idiot, it's better to knock her down with two punches than to seduce her."

After reading more than 150 chapters, the heroine is still 6 years old. The writing was too verbose and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I decided to give up.

The writing style of the work is fluent, the language is vivid, the characters are rich, and the plot is fascinating. Vote to support the author!

The first 80 chapters (Volume 1) are not interesting. They focus on family fights and daily life, with straightforward narratives like expository essays and inner monologues. Just about the death of the heroine's parents, the same causes and consequences are introduced three or four times! Just the sect's recruitment of disciples to test their spiritual roots took 6-7 chapters! To put it nicely, it's slow to gain steam, but to put it badly, it's just trying to make up for the word count! Normally speaking, storytelling should always have some emphasis, so the so-called detail is appropriate! However, the author seems to be too enthusiastic, but every point mentioned in the article is detailed, and even the inner derivation process is explained clearly! It was extremely boring to read, and many chapters can be quickly scrolled through. It may be more suitable for the "Cultivation of Immortality Literacy" in Novice Village! As far as the current plot, writing style, characterization, etc. Are concerned, I didn't have any special impression before, and I didn't have much expectations afterward. I was even persuaded to quit after reading other people's comments! So for the rest of the content, I plan to wait until the book runs out and then look back and see if I can read it.

I just think it's so long-winded. The same Huansha skirt is explained over and over again. Everything is always explained, reason one, reason two, reason three... No matter what the heroine does, she always explains the reason in a long way. It's so long-winded that I can't stand it anymore...

The creative ideas are good, but the writing is too verbose. The cause of death of the heroine's parents was written in detail in the book, and it was said exactly three times from other people's mouths. This is what I saw, and I don't know if it will be mentioned later. If it were in the paid part, it would be enough for one page.

Is there a male protagonist? Can he be involved?

Goodbye to all the nagging and nagging!

I didn't see the alchemy in Chapter 100. I went to order and made a loss.

I think it's pretty good. It doesn't have a particularly big protagonist halo, which is reasonable and I want to continue watching. But it ended in a hurry later on. I thought I would continue writing about Fuling Continent.

Six Years Old has too much writing at the beginning, the female protagonist has too much inner monologue, and the ending is a bit sloppy. It's almost 500 chapters and I still don't know who the male protagonist is.

Luo Xiaorou is really so stupid...

The plot progress is a bit slow. They are better than other families, and they are not quarrelsome.

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The description of the characters is just right, and the branches and main lines of the article change naturally and are interlocking. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! There is a shortage of books. Do you have any good book recommendations?

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