Talented

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The text is concise, lively and lively; with a few lines of dialogue and a few strokes of description, the characters' personalities are vividly displayed on the page, with every move and every move, they come alive!

The novel is remarkable both in terms of plot and writing style. I would like to make a suggestion. It is good to have delicate writing style, but too much emphasis on psychology will slow down the progress of the plot.

The language of the novel is very interesting. Some words may seem to be ridiculing, but in fact they contain profound truths. I believe the later chapters will be even more exciting, support me!

Good book, keep it now, wait until you lose weight and then kill it!

He is not very slow-tempered and knows how to be cautious when doing things. The protagonist really has potential, ahem, I hope I can find a partner, otherwise I will look lonely.

Novels are nothing more than full characters and exciting plots, so this novel is worth reading!

I also stole some of your bounties, please send them to the author 😄

This book gave me the feeling of re-reading previous non-internet novels, and it really has a traditional beauty to it.

If a book that is so refreshing and not pretentious becomes The Eunuch, I swear I will never read your book again, so please bear with me!

I've been following it. It's a very good book. I won't mention the good points. I hope the author will keep it up. I hope it will be helpful to the author's writing if I give you some suggestions. The plot of the story must be written reasonably. The plot of the trial mission in the second volume is nonsense and is extremely inconsistent with common sense. A young Gongsun Liang easily changed the mission distribution system without the help of his supervisor, and issued extremely unreasonable missions. He also said that he could not change it and said that sending someone to death was to train the disciple. , If this mission is not to send someone to death, it only means that Gongsun Liang is a relative of the protagonist. If it is a mission to send someone to death, he still has to go, which means that the people in this sect are all pigs. I hope that the author will try his best to make the plot consistent with common sense in future writing, especially if it can withstand the scrutiny of adults, it must be an adult fairy tale. Not all are for people under 14 years old.

The protagonist's sect introduced in the first volume is basically a well-known and upright sect, and frame-up of fellow sect members is totally out of the question. The protagonist is also a typical egoistic modern person. He is cautious when he occasionally helps others, and is born only when he is sure not to cause trouble for himself. The second volume is completely the opposite. The second generation was openly framed and exposed without any punishment. The compensation the protagonist received was some materials for upgrading a first-level flying sword, and this was because the protagonist worshiped Lie Hu's master. Is this really a case of underhand tactics that can't get a decent person on the stage? Are you clearly encouraging fellow students to kill each other? And the character of the protagonist has completely transformed into a hero. He is still the kind of person who is not afraid of danger and does not care about gains and losses. Even if he is misunderstood and insulted by the people he helps, there are still good people who will persevere to the end. What a noble person, a pure person... Now just looking at the second volume, I can't see any trace of the protagonist being a time traveler. It's completely aboriginal behavior, and he's still a heroic aboriginal.

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🤭🤭🤭5 recommendation tickets are given away!

Oh, sister, this book is so good, why didn't I discover it earlier!

I'm just here to shout, come on, come on, buddy, I believe that you will be rewarded for your efforts.

I have published 100,000 words in silence, but there are very few clicks to recommend and collect. Sometimes I feel quite uneasy and wonder if anyone is reading this book. Louzhu has basically never done any advertising. The genre of books like Talent is inherently slow to gain popularity, and the more traditional Xianxia books are not as interesting and innovative as other types of books. At least they need to be laid out to a certain extent before the world and plot to be depicted can be gradually revealed to everyone. In this regard, Lou Zhu has long been mentally prepared to build high walls, accumulate food, and fight for a long time, in order to write a sincere fairy tale. Of course, after all, it is still in the process of exploration. Due to limited writing power, energy and other aspects, it is inevitable that there will be problems of this kind. For this, Louzhu can only express my apologies, and thank you all for your tolerance. I also welcome your valuable opinions and even criticisms. I happily accept them and work hard to improve. Finally, every click, recommendation, and collection from everyone will give me great encouragement. Thanks again.

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