The Legend of Prehistoric Beasts

Haha~ It's pretty good. The author will keep updating it!

Dada's article is really wonderful. I have been reading it these days. Dada's writing style is exquisite and is definitely different from those unpopular white articles. The storyline is exquisitely designed, both reasonable and unexpected. The ups and downs of various conflicts are fascinating and real. It is a rare online article in recent years, especially the fate of the protagonist is even more heart-wrenching. Although everyone knows that such a story must have a happy ending, we are still frightened when the protagonist encounters danger, and feels relieved when he encounters adventure.

🥺 It's my birthday today. I went to eat, drink and have fun. Let's take a day off.

Well! Brother, here I go again! I'm here to advertise this time! But this time I read a few more chapters, and I'm saying a few words! Not looking for trouble! , This time, I think points will still be deducted for the handling of details, and it is best to use more foreshadowing, which will bring more pleasure to readers! Uh, okay, that's it. The collection was given the day before yesterday, and I recommend it to you today! I will continue to support you tomorrow! Also, I hope that your brothers will go to my place and take a look at "Peerless Beauty". When you return to visit, if you don't have a collection, you can add it to my collection. If you have, you can recommend it to me!

🤭Happy holidays and send you a moon cake!

For all friends who advertise on this floor, I will definitely visit back and bookmark it! ! ! ! ! !

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Said it was a ferocious beast. . Later, the beast turned into a ghost and planned to become a human. . . Also, there are too many third person pronouns. . . It feels like there are very few protagonists appearing. . Also, the main character feels like he is being treated with soy sauce. . The theme feels like an ordinary prehistoric mess. . It doesn't feel like there's much new to it. . After reading more than seventy chapters, it felt like this. . Also, the feel of Sanctification is similar to the others, but the writing is very good. . ╮(╯▽╰)╭

Five Decline of Heaven and Man 1. Dirty clothes. 2. The flowers on the head are wilting. 3. Sweating under the armpits. 4. Body stinks. 5. The unhappy seat refers to the five kinds of visions manifested by heavenly beings in the realm of desire, desire, and immortality when their life span is about to expire. Usually divided into two categories: large and small. In addition, Chinese immortals are not equal to Buddhist heavens (i. E. Indian heavens)

If the protagonist insists on not appearing, then it's a joke 🔨

[Fn=4_4] After sitting in front of the computer for a long time, my head is dizzy and I can't type many words... Take a day off...

The writing is so plain, I can't tell what the main character wants to do, it's so confusing and has no center.

It seems that no one has read this book 😭 (ps: I have no money recently... Feel free to give the author a thumbs up O(∩_∩)O...................................................................................................................................................... Ps's ps: I am really not here to gain a sense of presence) 🤫

It felt like a long time passed when I read the first chapter. . How can I gain weight?🤫

Before thanking you, I would like to apologize to you all. It was my fault in the past, I didn't even notice your existence! ! ! To be honest, I really didn't know there were so many people supporting me. I was so moved that I almost wanted to cry. I thought you were so silent. Now I realize that I just can't see it. Forgive me. When I was managing the book review section today, I found a post with more than 50 replies. When I clicked on it, I found that it was a post with a thousand collections. I was shocked at the time and really couldn't believe it. I tried to refresh the page to see if I had made a mistake, or if I had gone to someone else's book review section. Facts have proved that I did not go to the wrong place, nor did I read it wrong. These book friends all support me! I was confused at the time. Although I have a large collection of books, I don't have many book friends. Why did so many of them appear at once? Could it be that other book reviewers clicked on the upper right row, came in, and left their names? Thinking of this, I thought I guessed it right. At that time, I was thinking, it would be great if you could leave a message of support, so I followed you one by one and followed you all. Then I thought, are there many people who support me in the previous posts about honoring this book? Thinking of this, I kept looking for it in the book review management. Find the post that was clicked 50,000 times ago and open it to take a look. Oh my god, more than 80 replies! ! ! Then he clicked on them all with excitement. But.... More than half of the more than 80 replies were already followed! ! ! I was dumbfounded at the time. Could it be that this person didn't come in casually, but was a book friend who has always supported me? Then I ran back and looked at a thousand collection posts and found that they were all from those people! This has pushed all my previous thoughts away. It turns out that you are all book friends who have been supporting me! ! ! Too bad I have absolutely no idea! ! ! I read out the previous posts one by one about the honors of this book. My God... ... My mood at that time went up and down, and finally soared into the sky! I'm really, really, really happy. Thank you so much. Have supported me for so long. Especially the undulating wave. When he collected 300 collections, he was there. Then when the number of clicks exceeded 10,000, he was so powerful that he loved the Miku girl, the undulating wave! After that, 30,000 clicks, 50,000 clicks, and 1,000 collections! ! You all have been supporting me! In an instant, I felt that the door of hope in front of me was completely opened to me. I discovered that I was not fighting alone, and I was not walking silently on the narrow path where I could not see the light! Me and you! ! Thank you so much, really. When I was writing this book, I had been writing in silence and felt very lonely. Occasionally, a few book friends came to the book review area to discuss it with me, which made me happy for several days. I would also like to thank Rensan Yaoxiao here. Before I was aware of your existence, he has always been my motivation for writing books and allowed me to go through the troubles without recommendations again and again. And those book friends who rewarded me, I am really grateful. Of course, there are also those friends who have been silently voting for me. I won't name them here. Thank you, I will definitely write better and better novels to repay you! ! Thank you for supporting me! [Fn=2_7][fn=2_7][fn=2_7]

As written in the introduction, this book will cover four eras... From the beginning of Pangu to the end of the universe in later generations, four entire eras. The time is too long. Naturally, a lot of supporting actors are needed, because even gods cannot be immortal and live through four eras, except of course the saint Taozu. So first of all, recruit the second-hand method. Name: XX Gender: male/female/shemale/asexual/hermaphrodite/transvestite/female... Era: Age X Race: XX Enlightenment: XX Tao Remarks: Some simple additional instructions. Well, due to the changes of the times, there is one more thing to mention here. For example, in the first era, there were many races, except for the human race. Use your imagination, you can come to whatever race you want, it doesn't matter if the Saiyans come. The second era is almost the world of the human race. In this era, it can also be said that other races except the human race, and if it is the human race, then a surname must be added to the name. For example: First name: XX, last name: XX surname, XX surname. Well, mainly the eight surnames, you can search on Baidu, and then there are countless surnames within the eight surnames. Then the third era, the Buddhist and Taoist era, is similar to the second era, but the difference is that the races are simplified, divided into gods, demons, demons, humans, ghosts, etc. If you are a race other than human, then the race format is as follows: Race: Monster clan, XX clan. Or, race: Demon Race, XX Race. As for the fourth era, it's pretty much the same as above, with nothing much to add. Also, the supporting characters are first come, first served. Maybe if you like it, you can arrange him as the main supporting character and get a brilliant scene. Although my writing is poor, please believe me, I will try my best to describe it. Well, that's pretty much it. Thank you to everyone who stayed as a supporting actor, and thank you to everyone for your friendly appearance. Well, also, the lunch box will definitely be enough, if it is not enough, come to me.

. . . In other words, novels such as "Honghuang" have developed so far that they have basically reached the point where there is nothing to write about. If you must write, you must be innovative, but you can't just innovate or come up with ideas, and readers will accept them. . Writing novels is equivalent to telling stories. It is difficult for a person who cannot tell stories to write a novel well. . . . The story in a good novel can easily draw readers into it and make them want to put it down. It also makes it impossible to distinguish between true and false. And there are too many loopholes, which can easily arouse readers' disgust and disgust... Traditional ancient novels are now deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, and people are convinced that after generations of authors have changed and checked the data, the people or objects in traditional myths and legends have basically been summarized into a series. If you want to attract readers with novelty, if you don't have some private goods, then whoever touches them will basically die. . So now the prehistoric ones are basically invisible. . . Someone mentioned that Emperor Jun in your article was born so early or knew Daozu so early. Your reason is simply untenable... The ancient novels have been improved and developed from generation to generation, and have been very perfect. Why was Emperor Jun born as the sun star in Pangu's right eye the first one to be born, and why was he born so early? Are you working as the Chaos Demon God? It was impossible for Pangu to kill all the demon gods, right? After all, they are all derived from chaos, and everyone has a few tricks. According to traditional prehistoric times, there are many demon gods who are still alive. . As for Di Jun... As Pangu's right eye, he was equivalent to having just been ejaculated into his mother's body by his father. . . . Just like Sanqing, it takes quite a while to grow. After all, the foundation is different, the status is noble and the qualifications are good. . So before he was born, the three clans were playing with the immortal Chaos Demon God... And as for the three clans, according to many traditions in the Great Desolate River, the heads of the three clans are all Chaos Demon Gods... Can their descendants and the like be compared with Di Jun? It seems like you talked a lot of nonsense, but the summary is that your whole article is written in vernacular, which makes people not feel that way. After all, it is a classical prehistoric genre, so at least it should have some ancient meaning. Make people feel what they see. . I didn't say that you are required to write a complete classical Chinese novel. Even if you can write it, others won't want to read it. But at least the dialogue between the characters should have a half-white and half-ancient feeling, right? One more thing, your book has changed too much and is not particularly attractive. For some die-hard fans of The Ancient World, your book will basically be sentenced to death... One more thing, if you are not writing purely funny stories, you'd better get rid of those things. . So much for that. . . If my comment is helpful to you, that would be great. If you feel that my comment is nonsense, please don't worry. .