Ask About the World of Martial Arts

I was very sad when I read this book. Why did you write about Little Dragon Girl who died alone? Why didn't you just accept Little Dragon Girl? If you like the author, just accept them. Isn't it bad?

It's really written like shit. I'm trying to persuade you to quit after three chapters.

The exchange was extremely unequal. Qu Feiyan came up with a martial arts secret book that the protagonist could not practice. It was not even a top-level magical skill! The protagonist takes out the sword manual to ward off evil, the Twelve Postures of Yijin, the Nine Yin Manual, and the cold jade bed in the ancient tomb! As long as one of them is leaked, Huashan will be destroyed!

I spent dozens of pictures detailing the protagonist's martial arts training, enlightenment, and digging of ancient tombs. He is a top-notch master when he comes out of the mountain, and then Huashan is strong as a whole. Yue Buqun's martial arts progress is not inferior to Zuo Lengchan's. The result is exactly the same as the original work, with all kinds of calculations, and then the protagonist has never defeated anyone 🙂. After decades of development, without the plot of the protagonist, it is just like the original work. It's really frustrating to watch.

Everyone only knows that Xiao Longnu was fucked by Yin Zhiping, and they thought Yin Zhiping took advantage of it, but what is the truth? Three or four months after Xiao Longnu was fucked by Yin Zhiping, Xiao Longnu left Yang Guo and wanted to marry the owner of the Jueqing Valley. This was probably because she had a child, and pregnancy symptoms appeared. She was frightened and her mood fluctuated. Do you think what happened during this period of time is consistent with this situation? Then I jumped off a cliff before my belly was completely full. Do you really believe that adding some bullshit Hantan, honey and white fish can cure the heartless disease? I guess it just took a few years of suppression. Then he gave birth to little Dragon Girl, raised her for several years, told her about his past with Yang Guo, and taught her his kung fu before his death. Sixteen years later. Yang Guo reached the bottom of the valley and found the little dragon girl. At this time, Yang Guo was obviously overly excited and said: "Long'er, you are still so young, but I am already old." Isn't this obvious? Calculating the age again, Yang Guo was about 10 years old when he entered the ancient tomb, and Xiao Longnu was about 17 at the time. Let's assume that Xiao Longnu is seven years older than Yang Guo. Yang Guo left Zhong Nanshan when he was about 18 years old. He left Zhong Nanshan for a year of turmoil and separated for 16 years. That Xiao Longnu should be about 42 years old. How could she still look like a 16-year-old girl? And Xiao Longnu should be born at the age of 27, so on the surface it seems that Yin Zhiping took advantage of Xiao Longnu, but in fact Yang Guo slept with Yin Zhiping's daughter for so many years! Yin Zhiping guessed the beginning, but not the ending. So if Yin Zhiping wants to dig Xiao Longnu's grave, which excavator technology is better?

What a good book, it's just a rubbish book. The most unbearable Swordsman of the World, all kinds of cheating, all kinds of improvement, the result is rubbish, no one can do it, the most incompetent time traveler.

The training is written in great detail, including the protagonist's understanding, magical skills, and plot predictions. The training is as fierce as a tiger, and the damage when out of the mountain is 0.5. I am stupid. After decades of practice, no one can beat me, and nothing can change the plot. Fo, I suggest changing the name: Martial Arts World to make soy sauce

The front was actually pretty good, but something went wrong until Liu Zhengfeng washed his hands in the golden basin and started to be a Holy Mother. Qianwen and Linghu Chong took the Jiuyin Scripture and knew that people's hearts are sinister. When they arrived at Qu Feiyan, they taught it all. It was here that a large number of people were probably persuaded to quit. He cultivated the Nine Yin Manual, created his own martial arts, and was a master in various theories. However, he was almost beaten to death by Tian Boguang when he came out of the mountain. As a time traveler, he had so many adventures and practiced martial arts for more than ten years. In the end, he could only compete with supporting characters like the Thirteen Taibao of Songshan. He suppressed his combat power crazily and was too slow.

It was good before entering the plot of Swordsman, but after entering the plot, it kept poisoning. The protagonist's previous efforts were useless, various martial arts enlightenments, self-created martial arts, Nine Yin Scriptures, and evil sword manuals were all useless. The protagonist was still at Tian Boguang's level, and Linghu Chong still couldn't beat Tian Boguang. The plot still copied the original work, and it was another waste of time for a series that couldn't write a book without the original work.

In fact, writing about Infinity has two biggest advantages: one is the prophet, and the other is the knowledge and ability. If the protagonist participates in the plot, he can show his prophetic thoughts, or he can calmly learn ability knowledge and become a hermit. As a result, you participate in the plot and just follow the crowd, which makes the audience feel uncomfortable after reading it. Your book will not attract people. In fact, every book has its own ideas. No matter whether others agree or not, there are always people who agree. If you are involved in the plot but do not have your own ideas, it is better to watch a TV series.

I move forward step by step according to the plan and slowly make up for my past regrets. I feel a lot calmer after reading a chapter when I am busy.

I was so speechless about this book. After reading it for a long time, I realized that the protagonist was here to make soy sauce. There is no surprise or suspense at all, and the writing is wasted.

It's a little bit poisonous. Xiaoao saw it before it was put on the shelves. 😅😅😅 It's true that no one can beat it. Brother, you have learned the Nine Yin Manual. The five senses master-level exercises two hundred years ago, and the Nine Yang Divine Skill that was as famous as the Nine Yin Manual 100 years ago, made Zhang Wuji the best in the world. The co-author of the martial arts has declined. It's been 200 years, and you've learned the Nine Yin Manual and you still act like this. It's really an insult to the Nine Yin Manual. The author over-exaggerated the martial arts value of Xiaoao Jianghu, and overestimated the current martial arts. Jiuyin and Nine Yang should be the martial arts skills that crushed Xiaoao's era. The Sunflower Book was not famous at all 100 years ago. 200 years ago during the Shooting Condor Period, and 100 years ago during the Yitian Period, were there really people who practiced things like the Sunflower Book?

I read Chapter 77, and the more I read, the more frustrated I feel. I must admit that the description of the martial arts realm is okay, and there must be a process to practice, but I can't figure out what the role of the protagonist is. There is almost no excitement. I don't think I am high. Martial arts is all about grudges and grudges. Look at what you wrote, rubbish tuitui

Wow, I have something to say, it's so disgusting. I endured the discomfort and read the whole volume of Xiaoao. I just copied it anyway. The plot has not been changed, and it has an inexplicable ending. There is no ripples, no emotion, or human touch in the whole text. The reader is completely like a god. He looks at the plot with cold eyes and has no sense of involvement. Alas, I am speechless.

The content is bland and boring, and the main character is just like a passerby!

I won't talk about other issues, I'll just talk about emotional dramas. In fact, if you don't know how to write emotional dramas, you don't need to write them. Qu Feiyan, The Swordsman, felt that this relationship was inexplicable. I wanted to give up the book, but after thinking about it, I persisted. Well, when I saw Li Mochou, she turned into a licking dog and gave up instantly.

I saw these pictures of Qu Feiyan. He got out of the trap, was rubbish, overestimated his abilities, and his great cards were played to pieces. No brains at all

I saw people scolding me in the comments section. I left with satisfaction

Although the writing is generally good, Yue Buqun didn't write it well at the beginning anyway. I stopped watching. Yue Buqun, who has no soul, does not fit Yue Buqun's inherent personality. Yue Buqun is a person who can do anything for the rise of Huashan. In one sentence, in order to achieve his goal, he would kill his wife and daughter. Since Yue Buqun's character is tolerant of burdens, cunning and calculating, he behaves the same way before others. It needs to be reflected. For example, although the daughter is the first child, the son will be the eldest brother, and arrangements will be made in advance to pave the way for the son to inherit the throne in the future. Who knows except the wife and midwife anyway? My wife needs to be in trouble here. The midwife makes her own arrangements whether to kill or release. In addition, will Linghu Chong become the senior brother? How could Yue Buqun, who had a son, let such a stupid plot happen? In addition, the education of sons and daughters will definitely be separated! My wife teaches her daughter to be a righteous woman. Yue Buqun teaches his son how to be obscene without being too mature and become an old cunt together...

I can't stand it anymore. I have to teach all my martial arts skills to a demon sect woman.

Sixty-seven percent of it was copied, and the rest was inexplicably altered.

When I read the catalog, I found a strange point. The protagonist seems to be proud of being the best in martial arts! Why do you travel to the world of the divine eagle to become a disciple of the Quanzhen sect? I feel like they can't beat the protagonist, why do you want to become a disciple? Do you think you won't be able to write if you don't learn from the author? Funny.

The main character in this book has an IQ that is at the level of an ordinary person. He is tricked around by others and behaves like a monkey within the framework of others. Whatever others want from the Huashan Sect, the Huashan Sect will spin and spin based on what others say. He has profound martial arts and never refutes. He will do whatever Songshan says. He says whoever you want to send colludes with the demon sect. Ke Dong will not say anything to refute, but remains silent. Pigs are not so obedient.

First of all, the writing style is excellent. The main problem is to make up the original plot and praise the father. At this point, the underlying logic of the whole book collapses.

This book is too heavy. After all, it is an old book and many of its views are now considered poisonous.

I posted a few small comments in the chapter before, but I don't know where to respond, so I will make a formal comment here. . It would be more accurate to say that it feels like reading. To be honest, what attracted me to read this novel and keep reading was the part before the official plot of Swordsman began. Because it was created by the author himself, it is brand new, so it is still attractive. But! Saw this but didn't? ? However, the author has been arranging for the protagonist to be led by the plot since the beginning of the plot, which makes people have no sense of expectation and no sense of substitution! ! The latter was especially terrible, so much so that the more I watched, the more impatient and angry I became. I don't know what's going to happen next, but to be honest, you Xiaoao's writing here is getting worse and worse! The more I write, the more I feel like the author is filling me in! The more I write, the more it looks like a running account. Although I know that the author does not have water or wetness, it just gives me this feeling, or makes me feel this taste! Um? It feels like something is wrong, but it doesn't matter. . It's up to you, the author. I don't know how you want to write it, and how you will write it later, but in the public part, it really gives people a feeling that no matter what the protagonist is like, the final story must develop according to the general trend, which is very powerless. So if this is an over-the-top chapter, then I can tell you that you've gone too far. . . If it's not excessive, then what you write is really unflattering, and it even makes people ignore the existence of the protagonist in many cases! ! ! ! ! ! ! When I read your novel, I felt like this: happy, depressed, irritable, angry, numb, and abandoned the book. Is there any turning point in development later? I don't know, and I'm not in the mood to find out. Just to vent, otherwise I won't be happy this day if I don't have clear beliefs. Now I'm feeling better, then I'll go see the Taoist version... 🤫🔨

It's extremely toxic, it's a complete plagiarism from the original work, and there's no original plot. I strongly don't recommend it.

The writing is so bad. There are so many top-level martial arts foreshadowing, and you also create your own martial arts. You can still have anger and blood boiling against a passerby, and practice on a dog?

If you are not an old reader, you will not understand this book. It is great to have a book with such a complete structure in today's overwhelming world of immortals and heroes.