Mingwu Dao

Support the author, I haven't seen such a stylish novel in a long time. Personally, I feel that although some parts of the plot are a bit bland, it is generally okay, the setting is okay, and I feel that it will not fall apart in the later stages. What puzzles me is why the author doesn't describe the fighting. The fights in the book didn't leave much of an impression on me, but the setting was obviously good. My personal suggestion is that the protagonist's promotion in the Novice Village was a little faster in the early stage. I hope that the next step will be more compact, one tight and one loose. 😁

Are you planning to stop updating during the Spring Festival?

Why is this book so bad? So many holes have been buried and the preparations have been made for such a long time. Isn't this appropriate? The author is great! Damage received 999999999999999

Ruyi is actually a system, just like playing a game

It's too verbose and I wrote a lot of useless stuff.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist's luck value is relatively low, and being able to get a golden finger (awesome inheritance) is the embodiment of great luck.

Isn't this Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu →_→

Compared with the previous book, the writing feels like it was written by two people! "Wenwen" is written very delicately and is quite comfortable to read, and the plot (Tianlong's writing collapsed) is also smooth, and the description of martial arts is also very specific. But the writing style of this book feels completely different, very exciting...! It feels a bit like a late-stage dream...?

Can the ending of the author's last book be published in the new book? I can't find the following chapters.

Another author Ji enters the palace, and I give you a cool song

Great, very nice. The protagonist and villain have an online IQ. A novel worth reading.

Fantasy themes are the most testing of imagination and writing skills, so go for it!

They start with three golden chapters, but you haven't entered the state in chapter thirty... It will be better in chapter sixty...

I asked about the world of martial arts. The writing is very good. Can you continue writing?

The writing is mediocre and the plot is cliche. There is no waste material flow, it is ordinary. To be honest, this is indeed a relatively conservative writing, and ordinary new authors basically write this kind of routine. Old bookworm, I'd better forget it, it's too boring!

Is it interesting to repeat the analysis content over and over again?

I try to give you all my recommendation votes

Master Mingdao, wow, so excited

The real person's The Swordsman and the Divine Condor Dragon is a sacred book, the best one is the Divine Condor Scroll, and now a new book has finally been released

The protagonist brings together the two artistic conceptions of the setting sun and the moon, and maybe he can create a set of sun and moon rotating knives in the future←_←

The sun and the moon rotate, and the years fly by!

The author's last book was called "Asking"? The one who sent it

Word God, when did this person publish a new book? The previous "Ask the Martial Arts World" cannot be opened now. It feels like it has been eaten by the system.

I feel a sense of disappointment after reading this book. Of course, it's not that this book is bad. After all, the plot has not really unfolded with so few words. It's just that the original version of The Swordsman and the Condor Tianlong left people with too deep feelings. I once thought it was the most in-depth and emotional martial arts I have ever read. Watching the protagonist's own exploration of the avenue, watching the protagonist's knight-errant The righteous style and the author's different views and understanding of the characters and things in each book made me deeply admire and marvel at the protagonist and even the author. It even gave me a new understanding of these three books. The protagonist's research and understanding of Taoism and martial arts made me deeply feel that the author is a worldly master hidden among the people. But when I saw this book, I was really worried about the author. This book is really too complicated. It feels like a messy stew that combines fantasy martial arts and ancient system data and time travel. Just this complicated setting requires a long explanation, but I feel that the author is not good at this kind of starting point and plot. There is no passion or ignition in the fights between the characters. I feel that the author is too detailed in explaining his settings, and the plot between the characters is too loose and makes it a bit tiring to read. Let's talk about some personal things. I don't like the protagonist of this book very much. I feel that he is too utilitarian to do things. The point is unscrupulous, just like most of the protagonist templates in Qidian. Of course, this is not good or bad. It's just that I was too deeply affected by the previous book. I can't help but compare it with this book. This is not fair in itself. After all, the plot of the story and the character of the protagonist are different, but I still really love it. The male protagonist, who is chivalrous and has a moral demeanor in everything he does, just feels that the author is not very suitable for this kind of white novel. The author is still suitable for writing the kind of books that have his own insights and understanding. Of course, the above are my own words. Everyone has their own preferences. I wish this book will get better and better. Sorry for bothering you!

Come on, it's a rare martial arts book

I have read more than 80 chapters, and I have a little opinion, which may not be correct, but it is also a small suggestion for this book. Overall, it's not as good as the previous one. I didn't want to stop reading the last one. It took me a lot of effort to read this book with more than 80 chapters. 1. There is too much repetitive content. Some settings have been discussed before, but they are repeated in large sections later. There are also too many mental activities. 2. The system flows are poorly written and unattractive. 3. The pig's trotters exercises in this book are somewhat all-round. It seems that the all-round pig's trotters are no longer popular nowadays.

This cover looks familiar. Is the author from the martial arts world?

Isn't the Three Treasures Ruyi the treasure of the Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun's enlightenment?

Forehead. . . Author level 3? ? ? Have you written a book before, and then got 404? I want to know which book it is 😏😏😏

The author plagiarized my book review (ಡωಡ)