Seven Ages

Hibiscus emerges from clear water, naturally removing carvings Excessive pursuit of the gorgeousness of language will fail to achieve the purpose of beauty, and excessive emphasis on the beauty of words will make it ugly. If you read it smoothly and satisfactorily, it is a refreshing article!

After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Overall, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as a supplementary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

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